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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: May 20th, 2010, 5:28pm Report to Moderator
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What if the Hokey Pokey, IS what it's all about?

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Here's my entry.  Sorry for being so late.


          ZOMBIE VEGAN

EXT. FARM - DAY

THOMAS and STEVE, two ZOMBIES chase the terrified SHEILA (20) around a barn.  Despite running as fast as she can, she can't outrun the slow staggering movements of her decayed pursuers

              THOMAS
   Bra-a-ain.....

Running along a wheat field, Sheila trips on a rock. She screams as she falls to the ground.  Before she can get up, Thomas is on top of her.

              THOMAS
   Bra-a-ain....

and he bites into her head.

Steve watches for a moment before turning to the wheat.

              STEVE
   Gra-a-ain...

Steve staggers into the wheat field as Thomas rolls his eyes at him.

FINAL FADE OUT



Phil


Just spied this and it should be a commercial!!! Seriously!!!!

Would make an excellent commercial for a bread company!

Way to go! I love to laugh.  

Sandra



A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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jwent6688
Posted: May 20th, 2010, 5:40pm Report to Moderator
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Wherever I go, there Jwent.

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Way to go! I love to laugh.  

Sandra


I agree, didn't see it. pretty funny.

I wanna echo James' sentiments here. I think the bigger this gets, the more the authors should be attached to their scripts from the get go. Still drop em out five at a time. Give us all time to read. then another batch. I dont think they'd be ignored because of who wrote them if you give them in small doses.

I also think there would be less pissers.

But, I fear not much will change on this.

The guessing game is not that fun IMO. Who cares. It's not a competition. There's only a few of you who really know each's writing style that well anyway. It's to see what each other di with the challenge. Personally, rather know who I'm talking to when I review. I rarely go back, as most of us, to the thread once I've read it.

Be gone with anonimous!!!


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George Willson
Posted: May 21st, 2010, 9:46am Report to Moderator
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I also agree that the anonymity should go. It was a bit of the fun back in the day when the guessing was part of the game. This time, there isn't even a "Who wrote what?" thread that usually popped up shortly after the scripts were posted. I think it has run its course. It might also help to prevent the pisstakes (*aaaaahhhhh!!!*) from being submitted. People are less likely to submit crap if they know they'll be id'd from the start.


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Grandma Bear
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I agree and then we can also see if the newcomers who are always welcome, read and comment. If they don't, then we don't have spend time reading theirs. Unless we want to of course.

Last OWC people knew I wrote Issues and Obsession right away. This time I tried to write something nobody would guess was me and it worked.    It was a serious attempt however.

Can we start guessing or is that still too early?


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I'm guessing that one of Jeff's is Of Cannibals and Cabins


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Scar Tissue Films
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Quoted from Grandma Bear
I agree and then we can also see if the newcomers who are always welcome, read and comment. If they don't, then we don't have spend time reading theirs. Unless we want to of course.

Last OWC people knew I wrote Issues and Obsession right away. This time I tried to write something nobody would guess was me and it worked.    It was a serious attempt however.

Can we start guessing or is that still too early?


I thought I'd smoked you out? Did I fail?
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I thought I'd smoked you out? Did I fail?

...Phil didn't tell you?  



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Dreamscale
Posted: May 21st, 2010, 10:50am Report to Moderator
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Yes, Ste, you are correct!  I have to come clean.  Of Cannibals and Cabins is indeed mine.

Sorry everyone, but is sure was fun to write it.
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...Phil didn't tell you?  



No...is Peta yours?

Think I read Phil's as well...the census one with the hitman.
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You were right. I wrote PETA.  Good guessing there. No one else had me pinned correctly this time.

Did Phil write something?  I thought he went on vacation plus he had some assignment work to write.  Did I miss something?  

Did you write anything Rick?


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dogglebe
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Generally, I don't enter the OWC as I'm the one coming up with the genre/theme (a thankless job). Usually, Don runs the October OWC and I enter those.

I did post a very short script on this thread.  Go back about ten or fifteen posts.


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Scar Tissue Films
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Quoted from Grandma Bear
You were right. I wrote PETA.  Good guessing there. No one else had me pinned correctly this time.

Did Phil write something?  I thought he went on vacation plus he had some assignment work to write.  Did I miss something?  

Did you write anything Rick?


You might be right. The format looked like a Phil script somehow...but I may well be wrong on that one...as I clearly am.

I didn't write anything...the fallout I caused after last time has put me off forever.
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Quoted from Scar Tissue Films

Think I read Phil's as well...the census one with the hitman.


I don't want to out anyone but if you look closely you can see who wrote that script, and it's not Phil.
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George Willson
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I don't want to out anyone but if you look closely you can see who wrote that script, and it's not Phil.


Yeah, but I don't know who Ryan is...


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Dreamscale
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Ryan is a good reviewer, if nothing else!

His script isn't half bad either.
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