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I knew who wrote this. This is the same script submitted to Moviepoet back in September.
For a stand alone script, this is good with a nice twist. I thought Liz would be the killer and you turned it around.
But for the OWC, this doesn't fit here as the vegan/carnivore argument is barely touched on. It's not even an argument!
Sometimes the writing is too simplistic for my taste. Try to write more visually.
This is obviously not written in a week's time, so I can't comment on your effort. Sorry.
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Memwipe - Sci-Fi, Action, Thriller (114 pages) - In a world where memories can be erased by request, a Memory Erasing Specialist desperately searches for the culprit when his wife becomes a target for erasure -- with his former colleagues hot on his trail.
I knew who wrote this. This is the same script submitted to Moviepoet back in September.
For a stand alone script, this is good with a nice twist. I thought Liz would be the killer and you turned it around.
But for the OWC, this doesn't fit here as the vegan/carnivore argument is barely touched on. It's not even an argument!
Sometimes the writing is too simplistic for my taste. Try to write more visually.
This is obviously not written in a week's time, so I can't comment on your effort. Sorry.
Well that's no good. If this was written ahead of time, it completely goes against the spirit of the OWC.
I don't care how crappy the script is that someone ends up writing. If they're doing their best and writing it in a week's time and try to fall within the parameters, then that's good, but I don't like to hear someone's submitting something they had written "whenever".
Sorry to have upset anyone. I already admitted in a few places that this was meant to be an obvious "pisstake" and never intended to be anything more than that.
Failure is only the opportunity to begin again more intelligently - Dove Chocolate Wrapper
In order to amend my crimes against society, I herefore and hitherto promise, nay, vow- hell, I'll go all in I'm pinkie swearin', that I will not drink ANY Jack Daniels, Southern Comfort or even a lowly Coors Light until AFTER the OWC deadline is past. I will be a proud, noble and mostly sober member of the community, despite my carnal and twisted inclination to do other wise.
Course, I'd imagine those other heathen sinners who also sullied the grand reputation to take a similar oath of sobriety...
Failure is only the opportunity to begin again more intelligently - Dove Chocolate Wrapper