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Coding Herman
Posted: May 21st, 2010, 5:00pm Report to Moderator
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I knew who wrote this. This is the same script submitted to Moviepoet back in September.

For a stand alone script, this is good with a nice twist. I thought Liz would be the killer and you turned it around.

But for the OWC, this doesn't fit here as the vegan/carnivore argument is barely touched on. It's not even an argument!

Sometimes the writing is too simplistic for my taste. Try to write more visually.

This is obviously not written in a week's time, so I can't comment on your effort. Sorry.


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: May 21st, 2010, 5:10pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Coding Herman
I knew who wrote this. This is the same script submitted to Moviepoet back in September.

For a stand alone script, this is good with a nice twist. I thought Liz would be the killer and you turned it around.

But for the OWC, this doesn't fit here as the vegan/carnivore argument is barely touched on. It's not even an argument!

Sometimes the writing is too simplistic for my taste. Try to write more visually.

This is obviously not written in a week's time, so I can't comment on your effort. Sorry.


Well that's no good. If this was written ahead of time, it completely goes against the spirit of the OWC.

I don't care how crappy the script is that someone ends up writing. If they're doing their best and writing it in a week's time and try to fall within the parameters, then that's good, but I don't like to hear someone's submitting something they had written "whenever".

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Blakkwolfe
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Sorry to have upset anyone. I already admitted in a few places that this was meant to be an obvious "pisstake" and never intended to be anything more than that.


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It's too late to apologize Blackwolfe!  The damage is done!  This is an outrage!
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Dreamscale
Posted: May 21st, 2010, 5:45pm Report to Moderator
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An outrage!


To ski or not to ski...that's not even a question.
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Blakkwolfe
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In order to amend my crimes against society, I herefore and hitherto promise, nay, vow- hell, I'll go all in
I'm pinkie swearin', that I will not drink ANY Jack Daniels, Southern Comfort or even a lowly Coors Light until AFTER the OWC deadline is past. I will be a proud, noble and mostly sober member of the community, despite my carnal and twisted inclination to do other wise.

Course, I'd imagine those other heathen sinners who also sullied the grand reputation to take a similar oath of sobriety...


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Dreamscale
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This heathen sinner will make no such vow!!!!!

This is still indeed an OUTRAGE!!!!!!  An outrage, I tell you!


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