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I've created a new section called Site Redesign. I want to use this to capture ideas from you folks as well as layout my ideas. CJ and ScriptRevolution has very much spurred me to buckle down and make some long overdue changes to the site. Most notably, I've gotten a lot of submissions from folks who just want exposure and don't want criticism or reviews. I need a way to respect that wish. I also want to make it easier for Filmmakers to find good scripts to produce which means coming up with a way to showcase good work, yet still help new and developing screenwriters as well as do more to protect the writer.
I also want to be transparent about it. I hope that folks like CJ, Janet and other writers trying to get work out or help get work out and get some ideas, too.
This is very much a work in progress.
Going forward, I'm going to lay out each section of the site from the perspective of the writer and filmmaker (by filmmaker - director/producer be he/she student, indie or big budget).
I like the fact that you're trying to make the site better and more appealing to get our works produced. That's why I like you and this site. I'll contribute what I can, but I'm still a rookie (even though I'm old).
My Scripts: SHORTS Bed Bugs I Got The Shaft No Clowning Around Fool's Gold Five Days for Redemption
I like the fact that you're trying to make the site better and more appealing to get our works produced. That's why I like you and this site. I'll contribute what I can, but I'm still a rookie (even though I'm old).
Jeff,
There haven't been a lot of major improvements on the site for quite some time. It is sorely in need of an upgrade particularly with the increase in visibility it has gotten. Some automation is needed.
Well you are more than welcome to borrow as much or as little from Script Revolution, Don. Plus, if there's any way I can help on a technical level, I'm more than happy to try.
CJ,
Thanks. Seeing what you've done with SR has spurred me into action. I'm reaching out to filmmakers to see they are looking for as well as trying to put more control into the hads of the writers with regard to putting up, revising and taking down scripts. At this point, I'm not sure if I want to try to do this myself or looking outside to have it built. I've already downloaded and installed Drupal to play around with as a possibility as I like the direction you've taken with SR. And, I may reach out to you for technical support. I appreciate the offer.
Leaving aside all issues of Feasiblity some things I would like to see:
1. More Scripts. Particularly Feature Scripts.
A)Further to what you say about a section that allows people to merely showcase their scripts without receiving feedback, in a ideal world you'd take the best of other sites like Inktip and have a private section where only verified people can access it and scripts are available only by request allowing writers to post their work with minimised fear of it being stolen.
If it was verified (proof of ID, IMDB credits or something) and then there was a paper trail of people accessing the scripts, it would make it more secure and allow people to post their better, more commercial scripts without worrying too much that people will steal them.
This part could be monetised, like Inktip. Indeed, why not just put them out of business?
B) Again in an ideal world, I'd like to see this site hosting the best scripts from the festival/competition circuit.
Contact the different screenwriting festivals/competitions and offer their entrants the chance to showcase their work here, either for free on the board, or in the verified section above.
Maybe there's some scope for creating a kind of synergy, where we attract more filmmaking talent to see those scripts whilst we offer feedback in return.
Basically, in an ideal world, to attract all the best unproduced scripts onto the site.
2. It would be good if the shorts section was split into categories, so that you can peruse short Horror, short thrillers, drama etc
The front page could also be a bit more informative about the discussion board and the fact that this is the best place to learn how to write scripts and the best place to showcase your scripts.
I think it should hit you in the face that there is a thriving community on here dedicated to producing scripts/films.
This is only my first "riff" in this thread - and I have no doubt that many of my comments will mirror things that've already been said. But my first major thought:
Best to redesign the SS layout as absolutely user friendly as possible. IE: taking into account the ADD that all of us on the net now have. If a tab/link isn't obvious immediately, so many people just... drift away.
Re: STS - I get the feeling there are lots of people who confuse the Review showcase with the discussion boards - especially when it comes to submissions. And Rick's right... I don't think many newbies realize what a rich resource is available WITH the discussion boards.
Heck, if there's anyway that potential scoring could be added to scripts, that's good, too. I don't doubt that some people would "game the system" there, and have all their pals "vote up" their scripts - but as long as it's pointed out the votes are subjective, it still might work.
And I love your idea of adding certain optional searchables to all scripts on the site. Keywords, genre, page count, budget, current "score", etc. In other words, making it very easy for directors/producers to find what they're looking for, without slogging through a million scripts! ) Heck, what about even adding these possible filters: produced/unproduced writer, placed in contest X up to what point? (QF, SF, F, etc...)
That's my first five cents. I'm sure there'll be more.
But user and idiot (including me under that term) friendly? Oh yeah!
I don't like the idea of scoring scripts personally...IMO that's what destroyed Zoetrope. It leads to a toxic atmosphere.
It seems like a good idea, but what happened is that anyone who gave any kind of realistic score was attacked, so in the end everyone was forced to give 8/10 a least and all realistic feedback evaporated.
In the end it became a place just for cliques, and pretty much died.
... Heck, if there's anyway that potential scoring could be added to scripts, that's good, too. I don't doubt that some people would "game the system" there, and have all their pals "vote up" their scripts - but as long as it's pointed out the votes are subjective, it still might work. ...
I agree with all you said Janet, bar any scoring system. The scores will stand out regardless of adding a 'subjective' disclaimer.
That would change the dynamic of everything SS stands for imh, and some very good scripts could be bypassed in favour of a popularity of person vote. Jmh, of course.
Seems in terms of wanting or not wanting reviews, it would be easy enough for a submitter to click on button when submitting:
- NOT SEEKING COMMENTS OR REVIEWS - SEEKING COMMENTS AND REVIEWS
Whichever one they click should show up right under their logline.
Would also love to see the "PORTAL" tab renamed to "RECENT POSTS" or RECENT THREADS". I took me a year to figure out what Portal was for.
Would also like an easier way to link my scripts on this site. I ran out of space on my signature block to list all the scripts I have submitted here so eventually built my own site and just use the single HTTP address. Somehow, it would be nice if a SS user clicked on my User Name they would be able to see a list of my scripts sorted by category - that would be fab.
As always, Don - thanks for all the hard work and dedication.
That being said, there are fun things you could do. I see the "short script of the day, featured script of the month, etc in the center of the page but never really had a clue is to how one gets there. You could do something with that where members anonymously voted - similar to OWC.
The Home button two buttons to the right from the portal. Not the one at the top. If you click it, you will get here. http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl? Then you'll find the recent posts button near the bottom. I have it bookmarked so I can easily see all posts and don't have to go thread by thread.
I don't like the idea of scoring scripts personally...IMO that's what destroyed Zoetrope. It leads to a toxic atmosphere.
It seems like a good idea, but what happened is that anyone who gave any kind of realistic score was attacked, so in the end everyone was forced to give 8/10 a least and all realistic feedback evaporated.
In the end it became a place just for cliques, and pretty much died.
Last time I visited Zoetrope it seemed to mainly be a shop front for Coppola's wine business. From The Godfather to this. Like visiting a Scorsese website and finding he's hawking shoes.
Scoring isn't a great idea - apart from anything else, all opinions are subjective - one person might love a script, another hate it. You only have to see some of the feedback on some scripts here - it can vary wildly.
There's also the question of people not just marking their mates up, but marking those they don't like down, regardless of the quality of the script.