I finished mine yesterday in one sitting as well.

The wide open quality is great, but I may have broken the hinges off that. I might do another tonight. I'm worried mine might not fit all the parameters.

It was hard to pick one idea to develop.  Tons of options with the time travel premise. And I've always wanted to write something in that area of science fiction.

Good luck all. I bet our heads willlall be spinning trying to understand all these shorts. I can't wait to have my mind blown.

I have a first draft - not even sure i understand it! needs substantial work

Not wishing to break tradition i have gone down the same route as my other recent OWC's. It will be obvious which is mine, unless i have a second idea before then.

can you enter twice?  (as if i'm going to have time)

So I wrote an entry.  And I think it's bad.  Don't know if it's even good.

Serious revision must be done before I submit it, be first, I need food and need to also locate will-power.

I would but it is actually a concept of one my screenplays. No worries though, it is really nothing more than a conspiracy theory in future tense if anyone really thought about it. My layering is driving me nuts and much more difficult though. Hope all do well with it. I decided to do a dumb challenge myself though. That is writing the lyric to evoke emotion and rhythm. Low and behold somehow it is helping my thread better. Peace out, all you dream weavers. Although I don't know if this quote is original it may inspire. "When I am done weaving I better dang well have my audience believing"

Thanks Cordially,
Mitchell N Haleyou

Quoted from Reef Dreamer can you enter twice?  (as if i'm going to have time)

The rules clearly state that you can only enter once, but as you note, this is time dependent, so I suggest that if your script allows it, then you travel back in time, and enter a script before the one that you entered first which means you haven't actually entered one, and then enter the second one, which is in fact the first one, and then... ugh, sorry I've confused myself -- end your script now, before I finish and then. Go back to the first or second script. and. oh.

Well isn't that just normal screenwriting language. Don't forget to tear it apart put it back together just so you can tear it apart. Then when it is finally weaved don't forget that one thread you forgot so you can just tear it apart and weave again. LOL! Finally an understanding by someone, Thanks SiColl007
Peace out all,
Mitchell N Haleyou
(Inhale, Captivate and Rain Down On You With Entertainment)

Have hand written about 4 pages. So far it's all comic dialogue between the two heroes!

Lucky we got 15 pages this time., lol. No bother though - the story and ending all mapped out. Can edit it once I copy to computer for final submission.

I came up with the outline of the story Saturday, started it Sunday. Flew through the first 4 pages then spent hours on one line!

When I started I wondered if I could get to 10 pages, now wondering if I can do the story justice in 15 pages - Ahh the pain and pleasure of writing.

Work is interfering now, real life sucks tbh.

Not looking good over here.  Still haven't even begun to start thinking about this.

ARGH!!!

Read my feature instead, Jeff -- maybe you'll get motivated to write a badass script like I did!  

Just spell-checked (in American just to keep you all happy). Re-read it and to my surprise I thought it was a work of genius. But then I always do until I get the feedback. Anyone up for a hefty dose of Horsesh$t?

Quoted from Forgive Anyone up for a hefty dose of Horsesh$t?

Send it on. Am not able to take part so you get feedback from someone completely neutral.  

Quoted from Forgive Just spell-checked (in American just to keep you all happy). Re-read it and to my surprise I thought it was a work of genius. But then I always do until I get the feedback.

I think I've said these exact words before.

Quoted from Guest Read my feature instead, Jeff -- maybe you'll get motivated to write a badass script like I did!

Slabby...you fucker...

Read it tonight or I keeeel you