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rc1107
Posted: April 13th, 2009, 3:09pm Report to Moderator
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Eh.  Well I can't say it was a complete waste of time as it only took me about 48 seconds to read it.  But I can say honestly say I really didn't care for it.

Now, maybe if the author had really worked hard on an 8 page treatment building up drama and showing us the characters, then unloaded the aids and the potato salad...  that would have made something grand.

I think.  Or maybe it just would've pissed me off more.

Either way, although I thought it was a waste, I have to admit... I smiled.

- Mark


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Might want to brush up the grammar, missed some commas in the dialogue...Technically, I don't know if  HIV can be transmitted in the manner that was described, but whatever...
Didn't find it terribly funny, either, but eh, that's just me...I'd expect better from my favowite wascawy wabbit...


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I laughed like I was in high school again. Anyhow, would it have been more British to say silly bunts? And how could you tell the mayo just hadn't gone bad? Seriously, I didn't like it as an OWC entry. Same for Memories.

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