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Posted: April 13th, 2014, 9:05pm Report to Moderator
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The pisser voting is in :

1. Up from the Depths 2

2. Jail Bait




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Posted: April 13th, 2014, 9:07pm Report to Moderator
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...remember you can't satisfy everyone. Write a script that pushes the envelope than the peeps who are sensitive will be offended, if you write about puppy dogs and ice cream than the hard core action writers will be bored with the script and probably will be out before they hit the second page.


Oh, how true.  One of the best things a writer can learn (along with growing a very thick skin) is that *no* script will be universally loved.  People simply have very different tastes.  The script that goes for subtlety will bore some.  A specific action scene may thrill certain people, and elict yawns from others.  It doesn't matter where you are in your craft; that will always be true.

Which is not to say that one can't learn and gain oodles from reviews - both pro and con.  For instance, if 7 out of 10 people say your script was confusing or overwritten... well, you really should check it out.  And one review may be itself be "wrong" on two points (or at least arbitrary) and totally right on point three.  These OWCs are great things.  But one shouldn't take a single (or even a few) negative reviews to heart.  Those reviewers may simply have different tastes than the audience you're shooting for.  (Though, any writer who thinks they're perfect and doesn't keep an open mind does so to their own disservice.)

My fifteen cents.

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Quoted from irish eyes
The pisser voting is in :

1. Up from the Depths 2

2. Jail Bait




Mark


Up From the Depths 2 was my pick for the pissers.


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Dreamscale
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I voited for my favorte script and it was far from a pisser...buty...I did give 2 pissers a recommend.

Imagine the zaniness of  everyone could submit a  bit old hairy piss?
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Imagine the zaniness of  everyone could submit a  bit old hairy p*ss?


I have no idea what this means. Reminds me of talking to a man from deepest Kerry. He had a neck thicker than Tyson's and an accent to match.

I think he was talking about sheep. Are you talking about sheep?

If so, why are you talking about sheep? At least the man from Kerry had some. I hope so, anyway.

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It always cracks me up whrn peeps don't see such telltale signs of a big old giant aquirt of urine in to the pond.


You are talking about sheep!


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You are talking about sheep!


I did have lamb chops for dinner tonight...does that count?

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No. They're lambs. That's like saying you're going to turn up on a big horse and instead turn up on the back of a pert but tiny ass. Steady.

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Ren, the good news is that your Jowls somehow got 3 votes!  Really?  You get me?

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I have no idea what this means. Is this something to do with the sheep again?


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I have no idea what this means. Is this something to do with the sheep again?


Yes...of course...sheep...sleep...sheet...erm...uh...sure...

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# It's one of the toughest, brutal, yet honest, script competitions you can experience - at the end you often feel you have survived something.



I don't believe that 'honest' is correct. Other writers are the worst people to get advice on your work from... there may be the odd one we connect with. Often I find the advice of other writers is damaging. Which is why I stay away from directing other writers where I believe they should take their work. I may offer up an example, but it's never a serious proposition.

There are some writers that are good at that... not saying there isn't. For the most part though, other writers are crap at giving advice on where a story should go. It's not like they wouldn't have a heap of drafts to do with their work too.

Working with producers is a different thing entirely. Producer comments are designed to encourage... but I prefer to read the analyst notes straight. Analysts will write different notes for producers than they will the writer. You get it raw when they think they're writing for a producer who is going to pass along the notes in a more friendlier format.

Writers comments should be taken for what they are worth... a pinch of salt. Most of them won't be worth listening to.
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Since the names are being revealed tomorrow, are we going to put in our guesses on who wrote what?  It took a little research, but I'm pretty sure I figured out one of them.


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Since the names are being revealed tomorrow, are we going to put in our guesses on who wrote what?  It took a little research, but I'm pretty sure I figured out one of them.


Hmmm. I can take an educated guess with some, I think I know which ones were done by Rick, Jeff, maybe Janet(although I still have doubts)...and of course yours.
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Yours was the one I figured out Johnny. Had to go back a few OWC's to find my review where I pretty much echoed my words from this one.


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