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oJOHNNYoNUTSo
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Yours was the one I figured out Johnny. Had to go back a few OWC's to find my review where I pretty much echoed my words from this one.


Lol. Don't be too sure of yourself I have a gut feeling you're going to be in for a little shocker...
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Are you trying to say you wrote Jowls? LOL


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I thought YOU wrote Jowls LOL!
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Two recommends.
Two considers.



Oh, and I updated both the notes and spreadsheet to:

  • denote pissers
  • that they were comedies (IDK why I didn't consider that before)
  • the corresponding scores
  • notable high scores
  • the four submissions I'd like to first offer to animate in some form or fashion for the 2015 animated short film festival circuit.



EDIT: And Ren, I'm still gonna animate yours whether you like it or not! LOL!




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'Lord Laughs at the Wicked' writer (which I'm/we're all pretty sure is Silverback/Nick),

You've got a great scene here, even if it totally thumbs it's nose at the OWC.
(Whatever, I really don't care - in a healthy, good way of course, FWIW.)

Re our spat: Water under the bridge. Moooooving right along.

The technical demands to execute this scene are easy.
I could do this in a day or two just fer shitzengiggles, knowing there'd honestly be very little point or purpose to doing it.
There's no commercial value to it whatsoever.
It's JUST a funny scene.
It'd almost be an exercise, proving no real point since it's technical demands I already understand quite well.

"Look! We did this! He wrote it and I animated it! LOLOLOLOL!" like a couple of idiots.

Off the top of my head I can't think of much of anything I'd wanna change.
You wanna do the voice?  

If you're pretty sure you've got nothing better to do with this story I'd like to get in touch with you to discuss what my animation technical limitations are and how we can just make a goofy blip of a short.
A short-let!  

If you feel it's appropriate to hold onto this for a while, shop it around to more credentialed entities, then by all means gopherit!

Just know that this open offer is here, now and for down the road.


Sincerely,
Ray



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Even though I din't write one this time...I swear I din't...I read them all ...don't feel like posting all the notes since it's a done deal but if any of you want feedback, just pm me. Looks like most scripts got adequate reads this go around.
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Knew The Ordeal was written by Kev from the first paragraph. I'm very certain that Jeff wrote The Lagoon, the classic stilettos from Current Events can only be written by Pia. Up From the Depths is also by Jeff, but I doubt he put his real name on it. I had a few more, but can't remember them off the top of my head.
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Jeff never crossed my mind during Lagoon due to the story, but it seems upon closer inspection of the sentence structure, it does appear his fingerprints are there. It's a solid guess.
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I have my suspicions about who did what. But I shall keep them in my closet.

That way I don't look a fool and can pretend to be all wise after the event.

I might go in there later. I've lost the TV remote again. It's not where it usually is - in the fridge. Or the toilet. It might be with my spatula. I haven't seen it for a while either. Nor numerous other items of cultery. I think they may....

Enough of this gay banter. On to the point -

Which is when are these names going to be revealed? There's more speculation on here than there is on the news.

When will the submissions bit be open again? There's no rush. I was just wondering as it prompts me to write stuff.

Now. I'm going looking for the remote as some inane bint on the telly is trying to get me to buy a dress. It's not even the right colour for me.

R


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New Used Car

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Quoted from nawazm11
the classic stilettos from Current Events can only be written by Pia.

I didn't enter anything. I read a few, but I've been busy. Nice to be thought of as someone who uses classic stilettos in their scripts though.  


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Funny...no,,,no Lagoon for this kid.  I didn't say anything, but I always check the doc properties before I start and I was shocked to see P. Cook for Up from the Depths 2.

Maybe I wrote Jail Bait/Shark Bait?

Ren wrote Jowls, that much I know.

I'm very curious which one Johnny wrote, though.

My guess for Sentient is Asfarasiam or whtever the name is (Sorry, bro...can't think of it right now).

Dena probably wrote the rest of them.  
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Quoted from Dreamscale
Funny...no,,,no Lagoon for this kid.


Someone out there loves your style, and word selection.
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Quoted from Dreamscale
I always check the doc properties before I start and I was shocked to see P. Cook for Up from the Depths 2.

Weird Jeff. I just checked it and that's what it says, but I did not enter anything. If I had, I would've read and commented on all of them by now.

I hope it's written by someone with the same initials. If not, someone is trying to be funny. Don will know.  


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Quoted from Dreamscale
Funny...no,,,no Lagoon for this kid.



Quoted from oJOHNNYoNUTSo
Someone out there loves your style, and word selection.


It definitely wasn't me either, then.

Dreamscale's will have sheep in it. Either them or a similar subservient beast.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here

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My guess for Sentient is Asfarasiam...


I pretty sure Rick didn't write that one. His other entries look similar on the page, but his stories and prose are structured way differently. My best guess is he wrote The Nauticca Knot.

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