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Dreamscale
Posted: April 6th, 2014, 7:32pm Report to Moderator
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...delicious piss is like iron, Lib! Lol


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I apologise for being a total flog





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DarrenJamesSeeley
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Well I gave Don a heads up on a strange script "Retrevial" . There is an alternate solution I'm sure.
I'n fact, I'm almost positive.

**UPDATE**
Don let me know that the writer contacted him and is resubmitting.
The old thread for that script is gone and the updated one will be in the next batch or two

You better be good.
Big Shark is watching..

**UPDATE #2**

Don fixed the link.
Are there anymore that need fixing?


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
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I just did a headcountt. As of the time I write this, there is 20 scripots.
Don said there were a little over 30.
More today! Wooit Woot!


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
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If I have to read...

....were gonna need a bigger boat....

One more time, I'll...have no idea, but it's getting annoying, and I have 18/20 scripts to go.

Mind you, I would remind readers this is a OWC so not to expect perfect scripts, or the best writing, so go easy on those easy to fix issues.

So far the scripts have been a mixed bag but they do show decent variation considering a shark had to be somewhere around


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
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Quoted from RD
If I have to read...

....were gonna need a bigger boat....

One more time, I'll...have no idea, but it's getting annoying, and I have 18/20 scripts to go.


Put the cat out. Remove all breakables from the vicinity. Ensure loved ones are at a safe distance. Remain calm. This is not a test.

Another fellow traveller. Patience, hopper of grass. This will pass.

R


Out Of Character - updated


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The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
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Quoted from rendevous


Put the cat out. Remove all breakables from the vicinity. Ensure loved ones are at a safe distance. Remain calm. This is not a test.

Another fellow traveller. Patience, hopper of grass. This will pass.

R


I read your wise words. I kicked...err put the cat out...slow breaths and felt calm

Then I read another bloody script with bigger boat in it, yup number four....I've got the twitches now.

Off to bed


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The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
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New to all this. Is there a link where all the scripts from the one week challenge are listed. With so many, it's hard to keep up. Thank you


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Quoted from Grey
New to all this. Is there a link where all the scripts from the one week challenge are listed. With so many, it's hard to keep up. Thank you


You should be able to find them all here.  http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-OWC0414/

Thanks for reading, btw.  


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Thank you very much Angry Bear.


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RayW
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Hey, are we missing a script or two?

1     -     A Twist in the Tail
2     -     Alaskan Sound
3     -     American Shark in London
4     -     Blood in the Water
5     -     Current Events
6     -     Finning
7     -     Genetic Engineering
8     -     Hunt
9     -     Immersion Therapy
10     -     Jail Bait
11     -     Jaws: Pe'ahi
12     -     Jowls
13     -     Lord Laughs at the Wicked
14     -     Loyalty
15     -     Nauticca Knot
16     -     Reel Tension
17     -     Retrieval
18     -     Samebito
19     -     Sentient
20     -     Shark Dreaming
21     -     Shark Tale
22     -     Terror At Sea
23     -     The Lagoon
24     -     The Ordeal
25     -     The Shark Doctor
26     -     The Stillness in the Water
27     -     The Tides of Caeus
28     -     To Catch a Predator
29     -     Up from the Depths 2


Did a couple of jokers get DQed?





EDIT/UPDATE: Thank you, DJS!  

EDIT/UPDATE #2: Thank you, Don!  




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Quoted from RayW
Hey, are we missing a script or two?


Yep. Little Miss Sally's Last Surf is nowhere to be found  

Seriously though there were a few issues with some links and pdf troubles. That could have been a factor. Maybe some didn't submit in a pdf but a doc, or perhaps the writers are sparing the masses from a fate worse than death. Don did allow that one pager, which wasn't an error but intentional by that writer.

Could be anything.


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One script was removed at the request of the writer.

There are a total of 29 scripts.

Don



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I didn't know one could remove their scripts from the challenge.  Shame, as I entered mine without conscious thought and pretty much butchered the thing, lol.

By that I mean mine was originally 30 pages (not the challenge version) and I wanted to enter so I hacked it into little pieces and threw it in a blender.  What came out was a mangled mess.

But it's okay, right?  I entered.  Guess that's all that really matters is I participated.  

Back to reads now.  I'll try to get 10 more done today.  My plan is to read as many as possible.  I'll also leave a comment on my own when the writers are revealed what the heck went wrong with it.

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But it's okay, right?  I entered.  Guess that's all that really matters is I participated.  


All that really matters is that you had a go. You exercised your story-telling muscles. Maybe you missed on this one... it's not an easy genre to come up with something that's going to appeal to people. Plus, you don't have to appeal to everyone anyway. And writers make for some of the worst readers... and often our advice isn't worth a shit. So, don't worry about it. Hope my review of your work wasn't too harsh... if I've reviewed it yet.
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