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Grandma Bear
Posted: April 8th, 2014, 7:21pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from RayW
I wonder if I can C&P from my worksheet including the links...
Ham-nation!
Gimme a few and I'll put in all the links.  Grrr...


I've posted a link twice already...

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-OWC0414/  


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RayW
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Yeah...

That ain't the same.
That's a crazy list of randomly jumping around submissions every time someone comments.



Here: http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1396705947/s-57/highlight-/#num57
Now the link to my list is posted twice.




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My link is better. It shows how many people have commented on each script AND viewed the the script's thread!    


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My friend Pia is better than your friend Ray because she's a beautiful treasure and he's a nasty little booger.



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Stop that. It's silly.

Now then. To be serious. If only for a moment.

What happens next?

I don't mean like the weather or if I'll have to discuss my windows.

I mean when are the names being posted up, y'know. For the scripts. Not that banned list at the night club. We won't talk about that.

And when do we judge? The scripts I mean.

All help greatly appreciated.

And if you spot my bus pass please let me know. I'm running low on milk. And spoons.

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Names will be revealed on April 12th, 2014.

Prolly oughtta push that back a half-week and start voting this Saturday, instead



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Oooh!


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Only got a few left me thinks *with the exception of Jowls, which I probably won't read unless the author sends me a secret handshake or passcode to convince me * I'm super relieved that each of the writers went in different creative directions, but it also blows me away that sometimes we hit similar notes.

Looking forward to finishing up the rest tomorrow. I've probably ticked off some, apologies if I gave yours an unjust lickin'. All the scripts are great efforts so far!

Cheers all!

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Quoted from RayW

Prolly oughtta push that back a half-week and start voting this Saturday, instead


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Quoted from RayW

Prolly oughtta push that back a half-week and start voting this Saturday, instead



Isn't it just like a fargin' writer. Always re-writin'.
Thus a post will now go under the knide and have a good ol nip/tuck.
One final amendment coming up...
It makes perfect sense to have voting during the coming weekend.


BUT
Names will be revealed on US Tax Day, April 15th.

How bout that? We all good?
Wonderful.
Make it so, Don.




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Well next for me is stardom and fame! My entry has already been turned into a feature and below is a trailer. True there's no shark but rules are there for breaking!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VyY27n6eQs


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To my great surprise there are some very good scripts in this OWC

It's always difficult to compare with previous OWC's etc but to me this feels like one of  the strongest batches I've read, admittedly with a few that require a rather large budget  


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
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DustinBowcot
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Actors and water don't mix well these days... especially with all the health and safety. Soon as an actor goes in the water the costs are rising no matter what you try to do. Still though, there may be some willing to get their feet wet for a cut price fee.
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MarkRenshaw
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I think I’ve read/reviewed them all now. If I’ve missed yours nudge me and I will.

I’ve been pleasantly surprised by the quality and diversity of the entries. When the theme was announced I expected a lot of very similar shark attack stories but the results have been very impressive. Personally there’s going to be quite a few that get the vote from me.


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KevinLenihan
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Some good imagination in the stories. I'm more than half way through.

Agree with Bill, the writing is better than average for OWCs.

A lot of stories didn't really meet the spirit of the assignment. Either there was no shark or no shark attack. Jaws is about a marauding shark, and that was the theme.

I'm not sure I'll be able to vote for a story that doesn't have a shark attack of some sort. Or at least a great struggle with the beast, like Moby Dick.

One I am on the fence about was the one with sharkman. It was one of the better stories. In some ways I lean toward voting for that(though I have more to read). But I'm just not sure if sharkman qualifies for me. I'd feel better if he was in the ocean and attacked. Instead he runs through the hallways and becomes an office shark.

In another well written one, the only shark was in a dream, and it didn't really attack anyone.

But we definitely had a wide variety. No two stories were alike, and most of them were pretty unique from anything I've seen in film.
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