Woahhh, i'm gone for two days and the names have been revealed lol. Where have  i been? So, first thing i want to do is thank everybody who took the time to read and comment on my short.

One thing i've definetly learned is to PROOFREAD lol. Then again, this was written pretty quickly so i'll let that go on my conscience. But really, and honestly this was a great experience.

I wish i could go on and explain some thigns but i'm pretty hungry and need to eat since i just got home.

p.s. -- it's also interesting to see how some called this horrible as others thought it was pretty good. Opinions in readers can differ so much.

My food fiesta is over, and i can now explain what i was thinking with this. I thought up the concept becuase i had never written in girl's point of view... SO i decided to take this as the oppurtunity.

There seems to be problems with the ending, which i knew would be a problem before i entered it. (however i didn't see my typo with the Eve/Rose mix up. Wonder how i mixed up) The surprise wasn't really  supposed to be a surprised. Throughout the entire piece i wanted to have Eve slowly convincing Rose that Adam relly is cheap s*** and that it would happen again. OR i wanted to have Rose go save Adam herself that way SHE could do the damage to both of them..and as the cops got there, just say Eve did it.

I REALLY could've done better hinting those though. So, my bad. lol


Oh yeah, i also find it funny as some people thought a girl wrote it...i guess i accomplished my mission in that sense.

AND

Eve isn't crazy...just misunderstood. lol

if any more questions or comments, i'd be glad to hear it.