Hi James,

Thanks for giving this one a read.
Now to answer your comments...

1. "What is chunky shaped furniture"?

I think the script read something like: chunky shaped furniture in the darkest part of the room.
Chunky shaped would be like overstuffed, block shaped, but we really can't see what it is like here.

2. "Why did Steve disappear in the middle of the script"?

Steve disappeared because Emma kicked him out, and locked the door...

3. "then he shows up at the door and I completely lost it"

Why did you lose it? He had to show up. He loves her, and I wanted a happy ending.

4. My other complaint is that nothing really happens here. There is a dark figure then he is gone.

Yes, there was a dark figure, and Emma could have been in danger, but the next scene is in the hall showing the explosion in the bedroom (the baby devil lit the guy on fire).

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the whole moral to this story is: Without trust, there is no love.

That is the point Emma is trying to get across to Steve, and he finally gets it at the end.

Thanks again for giving this one a read,
Cindy

Could someone please e-mail this script to me at skyburg@hotmail.com ?

I am having trouble with outlook express and am not able to do so.

Thank you,

Cindy

You've got it my dear!!! It's been sent.

Sandra

Thank you Sandra,

Looks like I'm going to have to reboot this computer to get it to work right. Someone goofed with the settings, then I goofed with the settings trying to fix the goof up, and now they're completely all goofed up. Oh well...


Oh yeah, another thing, a good thing, it looks like this script is getting produced.  

Quoted from CindyLKeller Oh yeah, another thing, a good thing, it looks like this script is getting produced.

Cool news, Cindy.  I'm always glad when I hear that OWC scripts are getting produced.  Helps solidify the theory that good stuff can be done in a short amount of time.

Thanks Mike.

There's more interest in another OWC script that I wrote, too. "Focus" So we'll see.