This fit the challenge, and the song fit into the story well.  It was kind of A slow read though and some of the dialog felt weird.  It was pretty predictable, but still it was a good effort for this challenge, all the criteria was met.

Thank you to all who have reviewed my script!

I completely agreed that this story is too big for 12 pages, resulting in missing backstory, characters not fleshed out, story feels rushed, etc. I probably should have focused on one aspect of the story rather than throwing the entire "girl meets boy, girl loses boy, and girl gets boy back" thing in.

As many of you might have guessed, this is my first script ever and English is not my mother tongue. So it might have to do with the poor formatting and awkward dialogue. Guess I still have a lot to learn.

Anyway, I enjoyed doing this challenge. I had fun reading the other OWC scripts. Thanks.