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Posted: September 3rd, 2009, 7:45pm Report to Moderator
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Without making too many bold, sweeping predictions of who wrote what, I'm reasonably confident that I could call this one. Sweet story, clearly the stuff of romantic comedy stand-outs. Can easily imagine Anne Hathaway getting caught in that revolving door while, I dunno, some youngish guy that the chicks dig sets her up. In that respect, very much perfect. I liked the humor and sub-plot with Mr. Kerchev. Stealing the commode was pretty clever, I thought, as was his response to her request. Warm, funny and used the tune to good effect. Very well done.


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Thanks to all who gave this a read. i was stuck on pg. 7 Thursday night and was beginning to realize there was no possible way i was gonna make this romance believable in five more pages.

So insted of coming home after work Friday.... I went to happy hour instead. After a few pints I started to feel like and chicken and a failure. So I put down my beer... and picked some up at the local store to come home and finish.

This was the end result... some of you mentioned the quality of the second half of this script does not match the first half... I completely agree.

As far as the missing toilet.... Some liked it, some did not... But my childish humor will always revolve around that fascinating appliance and the various things that got into it...

Someone commented he should know who the boss is if she's going to interview at his company... Agreed, but It was something i was gonna flesh out in that scene on the street, which just got too long as it was. Figured Eric was doing that photo shoot becuase the were about to introduce him as the new man in charge since his father feel ill...

Again, not enough time... It is what it is.... Full of cliches, forgettable... I agree.

Glad i entered.... I had fun. Thanks, will do this again.

James


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