Some Things Never Die - Cindy
Screwed - Jeff
Love That Dare Note Speak It's Name - R.
Piano tears - Big Lew
Autumn Walk - Astrid
I've Got To Go - Tommy P
Terms of Endowment - Cam17
Reunion - michael Cornetto
Mem - Sandra (I'll take everyone elses word for it)
Our Time Deserves A song - Stevie
Your Song - Michel

Those are me guesses.Coupla i know are right. So... When is the reveal???

Quoted from Sandra Elstree. Likewise, in Piano Tears, We didn't find out WHY our AIRPORT LADY had her hardship in love and WHY our protagonist, TONY, had a child and not a wife. Or, perhaps I missed something? I could have. Sandra

Hmm.. i thought these were very well explained in this one. Maybe you should revisit it. I'll admit, it was one of my top three... Listen to the reporter.

Quoted from jwent6688 Hmm.. i thought these were very well explained in this one. Maybe you should revisit it. I'll admit, it was one of my top three... Listen to the reporter.

Perhaps YOU should revisit it. I've already spoken with the author and he seems pleased with my review.

As I  have said, I could have missed something.

Sandra

That's not enough, jwent6688

Please, if you think it was well explained. That's good!

But tell us HOW.  >  Sorry, but the moon is waning tonight.

That way we can learn.

Sandra

ANCHOR WOMAN (CONT’D)
But not just any man. Film director, Tony
Prince. A man who lost his wife an a car
crash three years ago. A man with friends
like Sting, Renee Zellweger and
screenwriter Eric Roth, who all helped
him make the most viewed You Tube video
ever produced. 12 million views, and over
one million hits to Tony’s web site in an
attempt to be the woman he’s looking for.
(Beat)
But she’s still out there.

Direct wuote from script... What is ambiguoos about how Tomy lost his wife???


MAN (PHONE/OVER)
(Eloquent, theatrical voice)
I’m not going to be able to meet your
flight. I’m very, very sorry --
(Long pause)
Shelia and I have been talking while
you’ve been away --
(Much longer pause, an
eternity)
--and we’re going to give it another try,
because of the girls. You’ve been fab -

This was "The woman's' phone call. She was having affair with married man waiting to go on trip with him. He blew her off...

Here's a clue about mi script....

It was 100 degrees as we sat beneath a willow tree
Whose tears didn't care, they just hung in the air
And refused to fall, to fall
I knew I'd made a horrible call
And now the state line felt like the Berlin wall
And there was no doubt about which side I was on

Smiles

Quoted from jwent6688 ANCHOR WOMAN (CONT’D) But not just any man. Film director, Tony Prince. A man who lost his wife an a car crash three years ago. A man with friends like Sting, Renee Zellweger and screenwriter Eric Roth, who all helped him make the most viewed You Tube video ever produced. 12 million views, and over one million hits to Tony’s web site in an attempt to be the woman he’s looking for. (Beat) But she’s still out there. Direct wuote from script... What is ambiguoos about how Tomy lost his wife??? MAN (PHONE/OVER) (Eloquent, theatrical voice) I’m not going to be able to meet your flight. I’m very, very sorry -- (Long pause) Shelia and I have been talking while you’ve been away -- (Much longer pause, an eternity) --and we’re going to give it another try, because of the girls. You’ve been fab - This was "The woman's' phone call. She was having affair with married man waiting to go on trip with him. He blew her off...

Excellent Babe! Love you!

We've discovered the problem.

I knew I was missing something and I mentioned it in my review regarding putting this up front! ...

But I hadn't caught the part about the car accident!

See??!!!

That's why working with other people truly HELPS!!!

Good job!! That's one of the problems that needs to get fixed.

Excellent work!

Sandra

Quoted from jwent6688 ANCHOR WOMAN (CONT’D) But not just any man. Film director, Tony Prince. A man who lost his wife an a car crash three years ago. A man with friends like Sting, Renee Zellweger and screenwriter Eric Roth, who all helped him make the most viewed You Tube video ever produced. 12 million views, and over one million hits to Tony’s web site in an attempt to be the woman he’s looking for. (Beat) But she’s still out there. Direct wuote from script... What is ambiguoos about how Tomy lost his wife??? MAN (PHONE/OVER) (Eloquent, theatrical voice) I’m not going to be able to meet your flight. I’m very, very sorry -- (Long pause) Shelia and I have been talking while you’ve been away -- (Much longer pause, an eternity) --and we’re going to give it another try, because of the girls. You’ve been fab - This was "The woman's' phone call. She was having affair with married man waiting to go on trip with him. He blew her off...

PPS:

I know that "The Woman" was blown off. My first question was "Why" he was talking to his little girl on the phone and there was the nanny there... yada-yada-yada... and I was questioning WHERE is his wife?

So you have just solved one of the problems I had in deciphering the script.

And, I have to add that Clorox, really nailed my sentiments with very few words.

More updates as we move on.  

Sandra

Quoted from Astrid Here's a clue about mi script.... It was 100 degrees as we sat beneath a willow tree Whose tears didn't care, they just hung in the air And refused to fall, to fall I knew I'd made a horrible call And now the state line felt like the Berlin wall And there was no doubt about which side I was on Smiles

If those were your lyrics i have not read it yet... Trying to finish up the rest, Bit of an asshole i am... maybe you don't want me too... Too late, i either read or will shortly...

Smiles

Quoted from jwent6688 If those were your lyrics i have not read it yet... Trying to finish up the rest, Bit of an asshole i am... maybe you don't want me too... Too late, i either read or will shortly... Smiles

I love you no matter-- asshole or not. You've injected insight!

Sandra

Quoted from jwent6688 If those were your lyrics i have not read it yet... Trying to finish up the rest, Bit of an asshole i am... maybe you don't want me too... Too late, i either read or will shortly... Smiles

No, those are the lyrics of the band that I was listening to when I wrote 'em, at least the last lyrics....more clues....!

and no, I don't hate' em!

Quoted from Astrid Those are not my lyrics, but the band was an influence XD If you kno who wrote those lyrics, then you might member another line from my script.

I've probably read it then... Scrolling down the list. Just a few innocents that have been spared from my drunken Tyranny. I think people will be able to understand me now. Take anything i say with a shaker of salt. posted two scripts so far. What the fuck do I know.

I talk to people on here like i would talk to my friends in the machine shop i work in. Very direct and vulgar, can assume some won't appreciate. but that's me...

I have only read four or five - in between work (first week back after my hols and it was pandemonium!) and writing my own projects - which obviously take priority - I didn't do as many as I'd hoped.

I am too new here to try to figure out who wrote what - although I know who wrote "Piano Tears" as he emailed me (and everyone else who commented, I assume) to thank me for the read!

Why was one script deleted? And which one was it?

Quoted from Niles_Crane I have only read four or five - in between work (first week back after my hols and it was pandemonium!) and writing my own projects - which obviously take priority - I didn't do as many as I'd hoped. I am too new here to try to figure out who wrote what - although I know who wrote "Piano Tears" as he emailed me (and everyone else who commented, I assume) to thank me for the read! Why was one script deleted? And which one was it?

Because, as Bert had mentioned:

The writer contributed ZERO!

Thus, he was labeled a leach and perhaps perhaps,

If he comes back, will understand:

Yachad.

Sandra

Quoted from Sandra Elstree. I love you no matter-- asshole or not. You've injected insight!

Oh No! Jwent6688 is injecting insight again.  Jwent - don't you know that injecting things is bad for  you!