Too bad I already submitted my list - this would definitely be a consider for me.

I liked Kora of course and the images are fantastic. I really liked the horns story and the way you told it - very believable.

But I think you should show us how he came up with the decision to stick with her. Kora told him not to take her but he did. I know it's love - but there should be something in the middle. I think we should see his struggle otherwise there's no story for me here. Maybe when you're free of dialog restriction you can amend this thing.
Otherwise it's Kora I'm drawn to and her story not your main characters and it should be this way.

Excellent job, Dena. You got 1 of my votes, and as you know, I didn't know this was yours.

I do know you told me you threw this together at the last minute and if that's really true, you deserve even more Kudos, as the writing, for the most part, was pretty damn good.

I agree, Jeff.  I really liked this one too.

I didn't read all of them, but of the ones I read, this one was my favorite. I loved the writing style. brought me along on the ride. Some things can definitely be made better, like Kora's dialogue and some refining of the plot so no one is left confused, but for a one week job, this one got my vote even though I wasn't allowed to vote.  

Yep well done Dena. My only Recommend. A script almost ready to go. I enjoyed the storytelling of this one. You have a natural writer's voice.

Oh Dena, Dena, Dena...you are truly awesome.

Wow you guys are too nice...and yes...I decided to write it Friday night at 6:45 so it was down to the wire and partly why I decided to write something on the short side of the contest parameters. What matters is that I had true fun writing this even though the time running out on me was a bit stressful but he script was fun. The only other fun script I've ever written was a short about aliens and a storm and a hotel Extraterrorestrial. It's good when you can really enjoy sitting down and writing..not worrying about budget or anything.

Means a lot that you guys liked it. Thank you for the reads. If I missed yours please pm me and I'll surely get to reading...I ran out of time with my job and family issues to get to them all!

I honestly don't know how this didn't place, as it seems many loved it and voted for it.

No offense to any of the actual "winners", but there are obviously a few that were nowhere near the quality of this one.

I don't get it, but obviously, that's no surprise to most here.  You get me?