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A Simply Scripts Christmas - OWC (currently 1668 views) |
Don |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 2:02pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16426 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
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Dreamscale |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 3:05pm |
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1st one for me, and it appears it's not to be taken seriously, as it's over the page limit - wait...didn't I say mine may be just over the page limit? HMMM...
HA! Very cute and funny. Well done!
I'll give it 6.2 stars out of 5 stars. |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 3:14pm |
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If this one wins, it's a fix. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 3:31pm |
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LocationUK Posts4323 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
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Cameron |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 3:43pm |
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Well, I actually laughed at a couple of bits.
Hey writer who I’m going to pretend I don’t know the identity of. It rambled, you could have totally got it down to 6 pages, but something tells me that was part of the deal here. It was like an art exhibit in a modern museum, you look at it for a while and have no idea what’s going on, and then just wander off and hope the creator’s okay...
It’s a sardonic take on the internetospheric interactions that we find ourselves in, got nowt really to do with what we’re writing about though, just merely an assessment of the forum that surrounds it. Over length and over my head, but I laughed so you got me there.
Cam
P.S. was listening to 9-5 by Dolly during the read (deal with it). Somehow seemed to match. |
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JEStaats |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 3:46pm |
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Old Timer No sh*t, there I was....
LocationTucson, AZ Posts1735 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
DQ - Billy wasn't introduced properly and Holiday was misspelled. Page length was spot on though! |
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eldave1 |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 3:57pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
A pisser and obvious intentional DQ from the start.
Poor Don....
Thanks for the chuckles - enjoyed it! |
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ghost and_ghostie gal |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 8:12pm |
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LocationA helluva long way from LA Posts1566 Posts Per Day 0.29 |
Ahem... well I thought this had some fresh spicy pieces of pepperoni stuck in a puddle of stale cheese. But hey, even bad pizza is pretty good, right? -A |
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Dreamscale |
Posted: December 19th, 2020, 8:28pm |
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Miranda |
Posted: December 20th, 2020, 10:13am |
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LocationSouth Florida Posts49 Posts Per Day 0.01 |
I am disheartened there was not a member called "Miranda" in this script.
I guess newbies have to win a place in SS.
Funny!
I wonder , if this is based on a true story . LOL |
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LC |
Posted: December 20th, 2020, 5:57pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7625 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Well, you made me laugh! Loved it. Especially loved Dave's characterisation. Well done! |
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MarkRenshaw |
Posted: December 21st, 2020, 7:14am |
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LocationUK Posts2335 Posts Per Day 0.58 |
Funny. Loved it. It was just missing an ageless avatar of me! |
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spesh2k |
Posted: December 21st, 2020, 4:02pm |
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LocationHarlem USA Posts1186 Posts Per Day 0.20 |
Hahaha! I liked this for what it was -- an SS inside joke. Almost felt like a Comedy Central Presents a Simply Scripts Roast, though much tamer and light-spirited. I loved the brief "Why is SS dying?" cameo with the you-know-who I'm not terribly fond of lol.
I thought to myself, "poor Dave" lol, but it's all in fun. Kinda bummed I wasn't in it but I haven't been around and present on the boards nearly as consistently as all the other "characters" lol. Twas a fun read!
-- Michael |
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eldave1 |
Posted: December 21st, 2020, 4:23pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Hahaha! I liked this for what it was -- an SS inside joke. Almost felt like a Comedy Central Presents a Simply Scripts Roast, though much tamer and light-spirited. I loved the brief "Why is SS dying?" cameo with the you-know-who I'm not terribly fond of lol.
I thought to myself, "poor Dave" lol, but it's all in fun. Kinda bummed I wasn't in it but I haven't been around and present on the boards nearly as consistently as all the other "characters" lol. Twas a fun read!
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Yes - I got a bit reamed (or is that reemed). You were in it -
Quoted Text MEMBER SPESH I think we just over six pages. Is this a DQ? |
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spesh2k |
Posted: December 21st, 2020, 4:36pm |
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LocationHarlem USA Posts1186 Posts Per Day 0.20 |
Oh, nice, missed that. But am I really that much of a stickler for the rules?? Lol, feels nice to be included!
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: December 22nd, 2020, 5:02am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
Ha! that was funny - my Christmas spirits have been raised Woohoo
Loved Zack asking about blood, and Barry popping up with his website gloom and doom.
Thanks for that |
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Two steps to writing a good screenplay: 1) Write a bad one 2) Fix it |
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MarkD |
Posted: December 22nd, 2020, 5:44pm |
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Am I Member Mark? If so, awesome! If not, still awesome! I loved this. |
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khamanna |
Posted: December 24th, 2020, 9:57pm |
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Ahaha. This was a lot of fun. A good script actually, entertaining. And it is 6.2! Wait, what are we talking about?
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Warren |
Posted: December 26th, 2020, 1:55am |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Funny stuff, Dave. Really enjoyed it. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: December 26th, 2020, 6:33am |
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LocationUK Posts4323 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
Really funny Dave, top job. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: December 26th, 2020, 11:32am |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
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SAC |
Posted: December 27th, 2020, 8:28am |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
Writer,
Nice, even though I wasn’t included. Then again, nothing about me really stands out anyway. Good job and thanks for the fun!
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khamanna |
Posted: December 27th, 2020, 1:59pm |
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Ahaha Dave. And I also liked it cause you painted us really close to the way we talk and act. Jeff is Jeff, Libby nicely done, Pia - absolutely, bloodthirsty Zack, Dustin says those things! Lol very nice and it actually has a theme and even a story. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: December 27th, 2020, 2:04pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Ahaha Dave. And I also liked it cause you painted us really close to the way we talk and act. Jeff is Jeff, Libby nicely done, Pia - absolutely, bloodthirsty Zack, Dustin says those things! Lol very nice and it actually has a theme and even a story. |
Thanks, Kham - glad you enjoyed it. Glad everyone took it in the homage/comedy theme that was intended. |
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Zack |
Posted: December 27th, 2020, 4:29pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4500 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
Funny stuff, Dave. You nailed it! |
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eldave1 |
Posted: December 27th, 2020, 6:06pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Funny stuff, Dave. You nailed it! |
Gracias |
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