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Don
Posted: December 21st, 2020, 9:42pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Quoted from SAC
Did A Christmas Carol - Remastered just get yanked? I just commented on it and now it's gone. Strange...


Hi Steve,

Sorry.  I removed the scripts from the OWC of the writers who withdrew.

Don.


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SAC
Posted: December 21st, 2020, 9:55pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Don


Hi Steve,

Sorry.  I removed the scripts from the OWC of the writers who withdrew.

Don.


Ten four


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Matthew Taylor
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2 writers and 4 scripts down - is this down to yesterdays pissing contest?

I have only read/commented on 9 scripts, and 3 of those have now gone which was a bloody waste of my time considering I doubt I can get to them all.

I need a nice Christmassy script to get back into the mood...


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MarkRenshaw
Posted: December 22nd, 2020, 9:23am Report to Moderator
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Finished reading them all now. Gonna sleep on them and vote tomorrow but I already have at least one excellent and several greats in mind. This is been a high quality turnout and a joy to read.

As for the shenanigans, I normally avoid mentioning such silly things as they happen pretty much in every OWC, but they happen in pretty much every OWC.

Could I suggest if anyone has an issue with a member of the forum or the way a moderator chooses to handle a situation you discuss in a PM? Airing dirty laundry in public serves no purpose and just causes arguments which detract from everything the OWC aims to achieve. I'm sure most of these issues could  be resolved amicably if you talked it out between yourselves.

The OWCs are free to enter and free not to enter. The reviews are sometimes brutal, sometimes offer no constructive suggestions, however, they are given freely and are the most honest comments you will ever receive on your screenplay. That is priceless, no matter how it makes you feel.

Keep it civil, sure, try not to make things personal, and if things go over a line for you, talk it out in a PM.

-Mark


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eldave1
Posted: December 22nd, 2020, 12:38pm Report to Moderator
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Done and done.

Observations:

Surprised there wasn't a Sci-Fi or an old-timey Christmas Western in the bunch. Sci-fi especially - thought for sure there would have been someone with an ornament with an alien portal into this strange holiday tradition.

I did expect elves on shelves.

I did not expect dildos. Nothing wrong with that - it just wasn't something I imagined coming (no pun intended).

I need to be a bit more careful. Thankfully Jeff pointed out a couple that I must have rushed through the first time around that I totally got on the second read. That resulted in score changes for me. I think sometimes I need to adopt a - if I didn't get it, it might have been the reader rather than the writer - approach to these.

If there were newbies in this challenge - well done. Typically, the newbies are obvious in these OWCs - I saw no instances where I thought - ah.... this is a new writer for sure. So kudos if you are out there.







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JEStaats
Posted: December 22nd, 2020, 2:16pm Report to Moderator
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No sh*t, there I was....

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Finished up this morning, read back through reviews to refresh, and voted.

There certainly was a full spectrum of entries, I'll give you that. I expected multiple elves on shelves (creepy little buggers that they are), some heartfelt entries, and some slashers (maybe not to that extreme, though). I, however, did not expect the rear entry. Rim shot.

Great job, everyone. Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year to all!
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Matthew Taylor
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I am now in the full swing of Christmas and Birthday prep, so I want to wish you all a happy, safe and Merry Christmas wherever you are in the world!

Thanks for the OWC entries, a joy to read. Some of them got me feeling Christmassy lol

Love to you all and to SS


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eldave1
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
I am now in the full swing of Christmas and Birthday prep, so I want to wish you all a happy, safe and Merry Christmas wherever you are in the world!

Thanks for the OWC entries, a joy to read. Some of them got me feeling Christmassy lol

Love to you all and to SS


Same to ya!


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Gum
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Oh man, it dropped to -35 Celsius overnight here, lock-down… pffft, bring it on. Nowhere to go, nothing to do now till after Christmas, so all good.

Kind of caught up on the threads a bit, bummer people disappeared, been there done that. Emotional roller coaster these things sure are; that which doesn’t kill us… makes us insane.

Anyway, thought I better check my previous comments to be sure I wasn’t an instigator as well, considering I drank and posted, err… think I’m good. I read all the scripts of this OWC, found a bit of time to post on three.  Lots of scripts to like this time around; the one script I really like is gone, another (one of my posts) is long winded and pretty much out of scope with everything, but I did mention it’ll probably get made, so, hopefully the author understands it’s nothing more than (bad) dry humour from my end, and is to be taken with a big gnarly grain of salt.

Curious to see who wrote what, I’m actually curious about a lot of things, like… where the heck did this year go? With all that was going on you’d think I’d be memorable, but no, I simply cannot remember anything memorable… it’s all been one big blur. But now I’m wandering, so truly… Merry Christmas all!
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Phew! Okay then. I wanted to share our praise here since everybody's handing them out.  Some mighty fine entries, not a bad one in the bunch. Had a blast reading them all.  No losers. Writing is a lonely, frustrating, insular process that breeds discontent and self-doubt. Trust your talent. Progress; grow. Seek help from people near you. Keep writing. Keep reading.


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LC
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Okay, voted. Some find entries. Heavy on horror and comedy.

Are people still reviewing and voting ?
Some entries still don't have that many, probably due to Christmas.

Wondering if we're going to do a -

Guess Who Wrote What?

Ah, you're all probably sleeping it off and I'm talking into the wind...  


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Quoted from LC
Okay, voted. Some find entries. Heavy on horror and comedy.

Are people still reviewing and voting ?
Some entries still don't have that many, probably due to Christmas.

Wondering if we're going to do a -

Guess Who Wrote What?

Ah, you're all probably sleeping it off and I'm talking into the wind...  


I know two for certain!


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Matthew Taylor
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I'll go Eldave for ?... If I'm allowed to guess that is


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LC  -  December 25th, 2020, 8:41pm
Edited out your guess for now, Matty.
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LC
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Oh, you're still up, Dave!

Hope you had a fine Chrissy Day's festivities.
I'm dying to know what you got btw, but Don hasn't put it up yet, so...

I'm guessing Ant for two entries (which doesn't take a genius) but I'll stay Mum/Mom for now...
Oh, and I think I have yours pegged, but could be wrong.


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eldave1
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
I'll go Eldave for... If I'm allowed to guess that is


I don't think we are allowed to guess until the voting is over.


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