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Posted: October 28th, 2012, 5:54pm Report to Moderator
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Sorry for not writing a long reply. I did like this one though. Quite a bit even! I guess if I were to film this one, I would have to order another corspe from the skeleton store.    

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James, I really enjoyed this. Just wanted to let you know it had my vote.

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James, I really enjoyed this. Just wanted to let you know it had my vote.

Libby



Thanks Libby, and thanks to everyone who took the time to read. Finally got power back here in C-town. Sandy was a real bitch.

I agree with most of the comments on this. The supernatural backstory really led to some on the nose dialogue. I also wanted to have the priest attempt to get them out, but I was running short on time and pages, so I really just had him prepare to die.  I felt he needed to make a decision too. He could've just taken off, but he waited to face the demon one last time.

The journal itself was all lies. The demon wrote it. I was actually going to have words appear on the pages, slowly leading them to their demise, but I was already over budget.

Good OWC everyone. Will be interesting to see what Michael and Pia can make out of some of these.

James


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Going back through my notes and this one was in my top four. I don't have a ton of notes except excellent writing but it may have gone a lil over budget.

Really great lil story.
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