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DanBall
Posted: November 5th, 2012, 5:13pm Report to Moderator
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I scrolled through this thread and found this...  I think this is the author: http://tinyurl.com/987w6nx

I can see why Dan was offended. That wasn't exactly cool.


Yeah, that's pretty much been the core of it. Guess I could've accentuated that more, but Ray knew it was there and hasn't done anything to take it back or apologize for it. Ergo, I'm still upset.


"I remember a time of chaos. Ruined dreams. This wasted land. But most of all, I remember The Road Warrior. The man we called 'Max'."

THE PINBALL WARRIOR (scifi, WIP, ~30 pg.)
A STAND AGAINST EVIL (short, 9 pg.)
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Okay, I'm starting to put some thoughts together as to how I can fix this.

First of all, I'm probably going to stick with most of the requirements, even adding the hurricane--why not? Next, I'm ditching most of the characters and focusing mainly on Misti and Daniel. The crux of the story is how one supernatural encounter makes a psychic medium question her 'gift' and her conscience. The end will be upbeat, but her outlook on life will be drastically different. (Can you tell my wife watches too much "Long Island Medium"?)


"I remember a time of chaos. Ruined dreams. This wasted land. But most of all, I remember The Road Warrior. The man we called 'Max'."

THE PINBALL WARRIOR (scifi, WIP, ~30 pg.)
A STAND AGAINST EVIL (short, 9 pg.)
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Good luck - I'm currently going through a rewrite myself.
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DanBall
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Good luck - I'm currently going through a rewrite myself.


Thanks, you too! I still need to read yours...  


"I remember a time of chaos. Ruined dreams. This wasted land. But most of all, I remember The Road Warrior. The man we called 'Max'."

THE PINBALL WARRIOR (scifi, WIP, ~30 pg.)
A STAND AGAINST EVIL (short, 9 pg.)
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DV44
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No need unless you want to. I'm changing some things around and it's going to be quite different than the original. If interested, I'll PM you when I'm done. Hopefully in a week or so.
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