Weighted Matrix: https://docs.google.com/spread.....TTUE&usp=sharing

Producer's Notes: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NNGaVlrrpkjIfp-BRGjpTE03W1e5lZuRceJ3wQECYaI/edit?usp=sharing

27. Be Careful What You Wish For by The Wish Factory - Horror - Revenge tastes sweet when you don't have to work for it.
Brief - Couple of warlocks use trick-or-treaters against one another

Location(s)  - Basement, house exterior & interior, 2nd house exterior
Cast - 7
Protagonist(s)  -
JONATHAN YOUNG, 40
ANDREW, 5, dressed as elf
SALLY, 4, dressed as elf
DAVE, 30s, dressed up as Santa
TED, 7
GIRL, 5, dressed as WENDY
Antagonist(s)  -
JIM, 25
Genre & Marketability - Supernatural comedy. This is not a horror story.
Comments  -  The plural of elf is "elves", not "elfs". Pg2 in very much danger of becoming classic witchcraft, not modern. Yep, not modern witchcraft.
Script format - fair.
Final word - Nice, but missable.

$2,000 - 3,000     Lo/Hi Estimated Budget Range
/ 6               Screenplay Pages
= $333 - 500          Estimated Cost Per Screen Minute

Adherence to Given Criteria:
Modern Witches and/or Warlocks - Nope
Horror - Nope

I, too, got a bit lost in this with the back and forth to Jack and Jonothan's house (best not to have your main characters names start with the same letter).

By the end I got it and found the ending to be the most enjoyable. Probably because I was expecting horror and that was the only horror in this.

Though parts of this were cute, it didn't work for me. Good effort though.

Renee