Quoted from dogglebe My first OWC script and I get a pisstake.  FML. As a comedy, it was pretty decent.  Laughable lines covering a variety of topics.  Two wacky characters.  A redneck loses his dick.  What's not to love? As the horror goes, it just wasn't there. Phil

Haha, you just had to click on this one first, you poor bastard.  Glad to see you're up and ornery.  You're right, there was no horror here, so I'm glad it even made it into the mix.  But, good to see the humor worked for you, mostly.    

Quoted from KevinLenihan A fun little pisser. Plenty of talent on display with the dialogue. And Obamacare doesn't cover witchcraft induced injuries?! How dare... Never heard it called twig and berries. Or 3 inch skinner. Not much else to say, except thanks for the fun entry, sorry I missed it during the OWC.

Thanks for the read, Kev.  I think I got yours, right?  If not, let me know.  There were so many this time around it was hard to keep track.

Yeah, I used "twig and berries" to complement the rustic setting

This was a hilarious pisstake. Although readable halfway through (it was clear that the witch was going to have her way with Bryar) I liked this a lot.

As Ray said - a 'Lonnie and Bryar' serious would be great. I could see these two getting in a lot of funny shite.

The writing was good. Dialogue was great. There is nothing more I can really point out that others haven't.

Renee