"FUCK FRENCHTOAST"  

BAM!    That would be a title worthy of the amazing story you've created here.

Wonderfully written in a stunning pace and style. Just like a weekend in Vegas. Gosh that takes me back ... I wonder what happened to ... sorry ... back to your story!

I see what you were going for, and I guess if you had more pages, the end wouldn't feel so sudden and out of context.

But anyway, you are truly gifted, and I learned a lot by your work.

Thank you for this entry.

Cheers,

Pedro