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Pale Yellow
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 8:31pm Report to Moderator
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OH yay! I loved this little script and enjoyed reviewing it!

So excited for you Gary!! Congrats!
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Great quality production, Gary!
And terrific acting all round.
Was a pleasure to watch. I bet you're very pleased.




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Gary in Houston
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Thanks so much Dena and Libby!! Very happy with how it turned out and glad you did too!  We've entered it into a couple of festivals, including the Austin Film Festival, so fingers crossed!

Gary


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Warren
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Bumping this so it's near the top. Wanted to watch the other night but had visitors. Will try again tonight.


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Warren
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Came out great, one to be proud of.

Congrats.


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DustinBowcot
Posted: July 13th, 2019, 8:30am Report to Moderator
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Quoted from DanC
I really can't add anything new.  I agree with the pros and cons that everyone else said.

If anything, I thought this rang a bit "hollow" in that I didn't feel anything for anyone.

Having 4 generations can be hard to follow in a 3-page script, trying to keep each one distinct.

I think it's because they don't have any personality.  They are generic characters.  I know that the page limit really hurt you, but, perhaps you should have cut out the grandmother and made it the daughter visiting her mom and taking her child (so, 3 generations instead).

Dan


Anyone know if Dan is OK?


Good luck at the festivals, Gary. Has the film been selected for them or have you just entered at this stage?
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Gary in Houston
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Quoted from Warren
Came out great, one to be proud of.

Congrats.


Thanks -- definitely am happy with how it turned out.


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Good luck at the festivals, Gary. Has the film been selected for them or have you just entered at this stage?


Just entered at this stage. We're also reaching out to the Alzheimer's Foundation of America to see if they would utilize the film on their site or in their promotional materials as a way to help promote giving to their research on music and memory.


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Gary, congrats   Woo-hoo!  Noticed you're in Texas.-Andrea


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Gary in Houston
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Thanks Andrea!  I am indeed in the great State of Texas!


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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