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I loved your set up! Thought there was some pretty good tension going on throughout. However, you lost me at the end. It's like you couldn't think of an ending, and just threw that in. Still, a good entry with smooth writing and memorable characters - good choice on the names. They stuck out.
You know something's right when I don't have to continually stop reading to make notes/corrections.
There are a few places here I could have, but the nice thing is that I didn't want to.
Things are rather vague here and that works both for you and against you, depending on how one looks at this.
Lassiter's comments really sound more like he's Holy than Unholy and I was actually thinking the twist would be that he is indeed God, not Satan, but as it plays out, very vaguely again, he must be Old Scratch.
I like it for exactly what it is and I disagree that it needs to be altered or added on to. It is what it is and the end is perfectly OK, as far as I'm concerned.
It's a solid effort and the best entry by a country mile with 5 more to read.
Like the others, I was with you until the end when things fell apart completely.
Why would the reception be moved to Lassiter's house? I didn't get that.
Writing was fine, but the story needs a better set-up for what's to come and better explained. It would only take another page or so to accomplish that.
Agree with what's been said before, the wedding setup took some valuable space away that could have been used to explain the sins of the congregation a bit more.
Lassiter says it's good to see Wooly with his robe on, apparently an allusion to the fact that he molests kids.
Good catch on the 3 sixes - agree that Lassiter is the devil since the party got moved to his house, in flames.
Solid writing, the only 'sin' is that the writer ran out of space with the 3 page constraint.