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Venom by Darren Higham - Sci Fi - Based on the Marvel Character of the same name. Venom becomes an unseen protector of the innocent, punsihing the guilty in hos own lethal way. But when he face up against the serial killer Cletus Kasady something goes wrong and soon he must battle against his greatest foe...Carnage 83 pages - rtf, format
I'll give this a full read when I have time, but from what I've seen thus far, you've left out a lot of important capitalization (like first appearance of characters, etc) and the structure of certain transitions is clunky.
However, i will give you points for writing a Venom-centric script, like the one that David Goyer was supposed to write (or might've written) that never got produced.
More comments later.
Blair D. Shedd is a illustrator and writer. A Semifinalist in the 2006 Nicholl Fellowships In Screenwriting, and currently a Quarterfinalist in the 2007 competition for the screenplay WAYWARD SON. http://www.oneGemini.com -- oneGemini Studios, Illustration and Design http://www.myspace.com/oneGemini -- Official oneGemini MySpace page and blog
"Life is a comedy to those who think, and a tragedy to those who feel."
Daren, if you are here, I just want you to know that I'm reading this. I have a lot going on so I'm only getting to read 10 pages here and 10 pages there. But I'm making notes as I go along so I hope to give you somewhat of an indepth review when I'm done.
Wow. Uh. I had no idea what this email was from. Had to re-read this thread. So that's cool - you replied to an 11 year old thread.
Blair D. Shedd is a illustrator and writer. A Semifinalist in the 2006 Nicholl Fellowships In Screenwriting, and currently a Quarterfinalist in the 2007 competition for the screenplay WAYWARD SON. http://www.oneGemini.com -- oneGemini Studios, Illustration and Design http://www.myspace.com/oneGemini -- Official oneGemini MySpace page and blog
"Life is a comedy to those who think, and a tragedy to those who feel."