Hi Adam.  Can I just say that I think you may be acting a little too defensively here? Sure Dustin could have put things a bit nicer, but he is helping you. His suggestions are constructive. I don't think it was his goal to upset you (at least not the first post!). If Dustin started skipping at page 3, imagine what a producer who has to read scripts ALL DAY LONG would do!

The problem here is right off the bat you've come back to every bit of feedback with a "yeah, but...". What's the point in this? If the script didn't work for someone for some reason you have to accept it. Then decide if it's something you're willing to work on. You can't argue with them into thinking the script is good. You'll never get that chance with a producer.

I think a lot of people could benefit from listening to feedback and suppressing the urge to defend their work.

Re the images: don't send a script to producers like that. Chances are they'll bin it without reading it because they'll think you won't know what you're doing.

Aaaanyway... I actually kind of like the script so far. The concept at least. It is over-written and other issues that have already been mentioned. Work on trimming this down and re-upload it with shorter, snappier actions and you'll get more reads.