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Green Arrow and Black Canary by Sean Andersen - Sci Fi, Fantasy - ...a new interpretation of how the two first met and work together.  69 pages - pdf, format


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Too many fragmented sentences to read. Sorry.

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I'm not that bothered about fragmented sentences. Quite like 'em. Makes it punchy. Yes. Too many though and it starts to lose flow,

I'm a bit fussy about getting the character names above their dialogue being in the right spot. They should be centred. Like my karma. Like my hair parting. No, not that one.

This needs work.

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