Solid writing. Wasn't really enjoying this until the Titanic reference at the end, which made me laugh. Funny shit.

Dialog is honestly pretty bad for the most part. There are a few funny lines though.

I thought it was funny how Carlos was attracted to Cindy. I don't know why. Guess I'm immature.

The ending saved this one for me. Nice work.

Hi Writer,

The script ticked all the boxes for this round - comedy, sewer, whistle - that's 5 points.

I like that you tried your hand at a more visual humor, well done.

I also liked Cindy's characterization but the other characters are a little flat imho, need a little more development.

It took me a little to get into the story but the ending tied things nicely, kudos for that.

There are some mistakes, but they are easy to fix.

A good effort overall. Not the best script of the bunch, but it shows some potential.

Good job,
David

Bit of a mixed bag for me. The fish out of water stuff didn't quite hit perfectly with the character you have. You set her up as kind of clueless and naive like in Legally Blonde. I guess that could work as a concept... spoiled, rich girl has a fall from grace and ends up working on a sewage crew. But you gotta set it up a bit more, maybe she's a huge germophobe too. This could work, but you've gotta establish a clearer premise.

Decent effort, has potential.