Well, this is interesting. It's a wonderful parody of James Bond, and as such, I think you nailed the characters and the dialogue. They fit the tone and the theme very well, and the story works too.

If this were anything but a parody, I'd have a larger issue with these things, but you wrote to the style and the tone of the piece. Whether it's intentional or not, I have no idea, but it works for me.

Hi Writer,

Not bad for a spy movie spoof. Easy to read, with some good imagery.

I liked the use of the whistle. It's clever and fits the piece.

It ticked all the criteria boxes.

Overall, a decent parody and an entertaining read.

David

I like the title.  Obviously someone having a laugh.

The idea and story in the beginning was not bad.  But the humour for me was lacking.  The ending wasn't the best.  I think it would read better if the agents had names like James B.