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Don
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 8:42am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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SimplyScript Fest by Dr. Draper - Don hosts a SimplyScripts film festival to showcase the overall winning script.  That has been filmed for us all to view. - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy, Comedy, Action


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What the hell?  Where did this come from?  But I’m glad it did!  Had me laughing all the way through.  Surely this is written by he who shall not be named.

Plus I get to play the part of a toilet. Who knew I had it in me?

5 stars all across!


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned

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Well, this was creative. Lol

Should have added some more "Bro's" and "Dude's" to my dialog. I like my costume, though.

Writing is a bit messy all the way through, but this is obviously a pisser so I'll let it slide.

Fun read.
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Matthew Taylor
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I don't get a character?!?! No points for you


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Two steps to writing a good screenplay:
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
I don't get a character?!?!


Me too!   

Some good dialogue.

Jeff seems to be a little disappointed at the moment, so why make him the stereotypical antagonist? I would've done the job as well.

This has only a Y/N possibility for criteria on the scoresheet.




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SAC
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Haha. Good bit of fun. Kinda makes me wish I’d entered!


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Points deducted for not including a sewer or whistle.

Loved reading this!!! It is a joyful punt. Thanks


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I always loved these SS scripts! Lots of fun. Wished it was a little longer.  


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This was funny and fun! Thanks. I liked my part, too. Some people might feel left out though. You should have included all the last contestants.


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Points deducted for not including a sewer or whistle.


There was a whistle. Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first.

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DustinBowcot
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Remember Libby looking for the sanitizer. She took out the whistle first.



I'm not going to ask.
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Zack
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Quoted from DustinBowcot


I'm not going to ask.


It's EXACTLY what you think it is.
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What's with that winner?!

"Image Problem" and "You Never Know What You'll Get" were robbed!


Feature-length scripts:
Who Wants to Be a Princess? (Family)
Glass House (Horror anthology)

TV pilots:
"Kord" (Fantasy)
"Mal Suerte" (Superhero)

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Warren
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Hi writer,


Quoted Text
WARREN
He better not. Rats of a Feather
has got to win.


Well if you have to put words in my mouth


Quoted Text
The title appears: 3 HAIL MARYS


Robbed!!! Damn you, Paul!!!


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JEFF
This is bullshit. I want to see
the votes, now!
He storms out stumping his feet.


Gave me a good chuckle.

Well that was fun. I've never been written into a script before.

I'm clearly going to have to give you a low score on story. You may have scored higher if I won, just saying

Thanks for that.

All the best.


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Good stuff.

Highlight: Gary as a toilet. Looking a little flush.

I preferred Frasier Crane to Pinocchio, but, that's a nit.

Would have considered it perfect, if only it went 2 lines onto page 6.


PaulKWrites.com

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The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature
Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature

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Bravo, Writer!
Cracked me up first thing in the morning.

This would have won the Comedy round for me. Pity you missed the deadline.
I loved Warren telling me: Enough with me too.

A classic denouement too.
Loved it.


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