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Mr. Blonde
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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Sorry for the delay.

Your Hero Is the Villain.


3.09 - (std 0.54) The Tale of Tin Can Kade by Mark Renshaw (markrenshaw) writing as Samuel Fuller (Physician) - Leather Belt, Pharmacist, Observatory - Short, Western

3.09 - (std 0.70) Ice by Paul Knauer (PKCardinal) writing as Noshite Sherlock - Hand Warmer, Bailiff, Factory - Short, Mystery

3.09 - (std 0.94) Snake My Drain by Marnie (Mmmarnie) writing as John S. Leaky - Plunger, Plumber, Home Improvement Store - Short, Fantasy

3.00 - (std 0.77) The Heart of the Matter by Anthony Cawood (Anthony Cawood) writing as The Crypt Keeper - Fire Poker, Jeweller, Cemetery  - Short, Horror

3.00 - (std 0.89) Post Mortem by John Staats (JEStaats) writing as Thomas Malory II - Magnifying Glass, Magician, Hotel - Short, Fantasy

2.91 - (std 0.70) Cleaning Up The East End by Frank MacCrory (FrankM) writing as Aunt Agonist - Ceiling Fan, Park Ranger, Bathhouse - Short, Historical

2.91 - (std 0.83) Cody and Petey Hanging Out on a Covidy Summer Day by Anthony J Russo (ajr) writing as Heinrich Manure - Pack of gGum, Chauffeur, Arena - Short, Comedy

2.55 - (std 0.82) Endangered Species by Darren Seeley (DarrenJamesSeeley) writing as Juneau Takagus - Necktie, Judge, Pet Shop - Short, Fantasy

2.45 - (std 0.52) Well, I Just Had To Laugh by Steve McDonell (Stevie) writing as Maxwell Hammer - A Pair Of Flip Flops, Stand Up Comedian, Newsstand - Short, Historical

2.45 - (std 0.82) The Chase by Owen Herity (Geezis) writing as Sergio Leone - Black Light, Mascot, Ice Cream Parlour - Short, Action/Adventure

2.36 - (std 0.92) A Figurine by Khamanna Iskandarova (khamanna) writing as Mason - Flower Vase, Mason, College Dorm - Short, Western

2.09 - (std 0.70) Night Trippin' by Rennie Arundell (Arundel) writing as Sir Mix and Match - Chandelier, Theater Actor, Clothing Store - Short, Horror



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Who's who? I wrote Post Mortem. And YES, Merlin is a magician (but then again, so was Perry)!
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Who's who?


I'm Molly.


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This is why Don is better at this. Two minutes. Lol.


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Just leave me Mason. I’m happy with that
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Well done Mark, Paul and Marnie! And everyone else too!


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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Nice job Mark and Paul!!


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Well done Mark!

Johnny, yours was my fave, and a shout out to Frankie who wrote a great one too



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Congrats Marnie, Mark and Paul.

Lol, Marnie, you ARE Mollie in this case)
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Congratulations Marnie, Paul, and Mark!


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Impressive win, place and show! Paul's the one to beat! And what a lead you have. Dammit.
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Well done Mark!

Johnny, yours was my fave, and a shout out to Frankie who wrote a great one too


Thanks, Stevie. I've been disappointed in my scoring but, hey, peeps have their faves.
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Congrats, Milly, Molly, Maggie, and commiserations to Mandy.

Should have guessed Marnie's. There's a certain common theme running above the set theme.  


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Wow, it is neck, neck and neck at the post!

Congratulations fellow winners of the week, Marnie and Paul!

If this was for a SS thong, we'd have to share it.


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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
If this was for a SS thong, we'd have to share it.


Nah, I'd just give it to Stevie and everyone else would get a Sbarro gift card. Lol.


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Nah, I'd just give it to Stevie and everyone else would get a Sbarro gift card. Lol.


I always thought sharing means having one for all. Stevie would wear it some but then he would need to pass it along to the other two. And you’d keep your Sbarro card.
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Congrats, Milly, Molly, Maggie, and commiserations to Mandy.

Should have guessed Marnie's. There's a certain common theme running above the set theme.  


Whatever do you mean, Libby? Lol. I had a blast writing it. I was holding on tight to those sweet ass variables,  waiting for a theme that I could have some fun with. Glad some people enjoyed it. And thanks.  


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Glad some people enjoyed it. And thanks.  


It was my favorite - nice work!
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Have not followed this, embarrassed to say, but IMO, Snake My Drain is the BEST title!  


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I didn't read all this round, but I did love The Heart of the Matter (Ant, great job), and Arundel's crazy Night Trippin' too.  


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I’d only wear a denim thong and only if it was live streamed to the world



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Quoted from LC
I didn't read all this round, but I did love The Heart of the Matter (Ant, great job), and Arundel's crazy Night Trippin' too.  


I'd love to get your take on Post Mortem if you get a chance!
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Will do, John! The title's already killer.  
See, the problem with me is SciFi, yay, but Fantasy is my least favorite genre, but I will be open-minded.

Edit: Ah okay, read it and I can see why this rose to the top tier. Big thumbs up!
Gotta go out now, John, but will post on the thread later.



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Thanks Libby!


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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Thanks everybody!

My 3 top scripts this week were Snake, Heart of the Matter and Figurine.


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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
Wow, it is neck, neck and neck at the post!



John says I have the lead. If so, I feel like the fighter pilot... yanking my head from side to side, desperate to get a look behind me... "I can't shake these guys! They're everywhere!"

If I land this thing, it'll be all shot full of holes, trailing smoke and sliding in sideways.


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60 Feet Under - Low budget, contained thriller/Feature
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Quoted from PKCardinal
Thanks everybody!

My 3 top scripts this week were Snake, Heart of the Matter and Figurine.


Whoa. And Figurine! I was not prepared for it.

But thank you. Maybe I’ll rewrite this one. Although it will take a lot of work being part western and all.
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Whoa. And Figurine! I was not prepared for it.

But thank you. Maybe I’ll rewrite this one. Although it will take a lot of work being part western and all.


I really enjoyed it. I thought your idea to break it into time frames in order to satisfy both the western and dorm room parameters was excellent.

Really good stuff.

Twist was great, too.


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