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Posted: February 10th, 2009, 6:12pm Report to Moderator
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Green Lantern by TC Powell - Adventure, Superhero - Based on the character from DC Comics, a dying extraterrestrial peacekeeper fleeing from an intergalactic civil war gives a ring of immense power to former astronaut Hal Jordan who must wield it to protect Earth from an alien invasion. 117 pages - pdf, format


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I'm up to the second attempt at the asteroid.  I love the way it reads.  The atmosphere is perfect.  As I get further, I'll post more.


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I enjoyed it. Probably about 14-15 typos but an enjoyable story. One thing to bring to your attention. In the final battle you said Darkseid was afraid and retreats. I am a comic fan and I have never seend Darkseid afraid of anything. He might retreat but I have neve seen him afraid. How long did it take to write? I am about to post my own script which is based on a comic book character-I would appreciate any feedback fromany of you-O
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