I'm Michael, BTW, and ScriptShooters is Nate.

I understand where all you guys are coming from, but me personally, I write scripts for fun, as does Nate.  We have no intention of going pro just yet.

Sorry about the mistake.


Phil

Quoted from Script Shooters Annoucement, The Guardian Knight has now been resubmitted to SimplyScripts for a PDF formatting for the many requested people.

Why is it an FDR file instead of PDF?

Also, are you going to direct it? I say this because I notice camera directions on the first page...

Wow... How'd these guys get to be mob bosses when they're so, how do I put this, so...not very smart?
Why would they all showup at a warehouse after a phone call from a guy they don't know, who they think sounds dumb?

Ok, I'll continue reading...

They come to a GLASS WALL separating the hallway from a main conference-like area.  Some of the window panes on the wall are either CRACKED, BROKEN or MISSING.  The walls themselves are covered in grime.

You spend an entire paragragh describing the set(which is also another job the writer shouldn't do unless it's important to the story) and not much action.

I'm not sure there is much incentive to read further. You guys need to do a redraft. make sure things are plausible.