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Don
Posted: June 13th, 2009, 5:58pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Bayou by Milan Antal - Action - Detroit base Labor Union hire hit shooters to take out JFK.New Orleans Italian Mafia working together with French Cajun Mafia. 89 pages - pdf, format


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Is the writer of this around?  If so I have a few questions.  Page 25 is golden, but if the writer just dumped his or her script here then there is no point in going any further.


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The story made no sense to me. I had no idea what was going on. Was it supposed to be like that?
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"We see him speak in French"? "GLOF OF MEXICO"? How about running spell checker and using the proper script format? Oh, and a story that actually makes sense would help, too!
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Sorry, but your plot goes nowhere. Next time, try making note cards with scenes on each of them and piece it out to see if it all makes sense.
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