Snapshots of War by Troy Oates - Action, Adventure - A newspaper photographer is forced to go on the run with an American soldier in South Africa after being forced to kill the presidents brother in self defense. With the whole South African army looking for them, and the rebels looking for any excuse for war, they need to fight for their lives. 89 pages - pdf, format

stopped at page 8 where there is a slug that doesnt tell me when the next scene happen, day or night. seems obvious but i dont wanna guess. also very very far-fetched, Yande is a guide for white tourists and in all those years u dont think he ever took a picture? some german or japanese tourist never asked yande to take a picture of that beautiful setting? i find that hard to believe. but then yande drives the car with no problem? and even wanna teach? in my experience u need a licence to drive, not to take pictures. i think you should take that bit away, it did it from me. but b4 that i actually liked your writing. was good and interesting. i was curious. Maybe yande shouldnt sound so perfect in his english either. u dont tell us if he has an accent either(or do you? i dont remember). show us. cheers mate.