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Crooked Creek by Patrick McFadden Jr. - Action, Adventure - An 18 hole golf course comedic odyssey through a racially challenged and uptight country club.. 70 pages - pdf, format
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I can't pass reading page 1, because of the followings
- industry standard Font style/size = Courier New/12 (not any other fonts) -1st locale is totally wrong, EXT. A CROWDED GOLF COURSE PARKING LOT ON A BEAUTIFUL SUNDAY AFTERNOON? (not very professional, and most likely need to be changed) it should be better with ----
EXT: CROWDED PARKING LOT -DAY
leave the GOLF COURSE part. The audience is just seeing the crowded parking lot, and how would they know it's a Golf course parking lot? Is there a sign? If you really really want to put the Golf course..do like this
EXT: CROWDED PARKING LOT- GOLF CLUB -AFTERNOON
....and you're using a lot of actions of characters in parenthesis..dont' do that. Instead of
JAPANESE PLAYBOY (waving at the boys) it would be better with Japanese playboy waves at the boys.
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