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Posted: October 15th, 2010, 5:00pm Report to Moderator
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Rampage! by J Sun Martinez - Action, Adventure - An experimental drug turns three unsuspecting test volunteers into giant monsters who attack Las Vegas. Based on the video games from Midway. 120 pages - doc, format


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Posted: October 15th, 2010, 5:05pm Report to Moderator
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Man, I'd love to have read this one.  I grew up in the arcades as a kid and played this every chance I got.  I'd love to see someone do it justice for the big screen, unfortunately this script is horribly formated.  For some reason when I try to read it everything is crammed together.

Good concept, bad execution.

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Posted: October 15th, 2010, 5:21pm Report to Moderator
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Jose, you can download Celtix screenwriting software for free and easily convert this script into a better looking format.  

http://celtx.com/

As for your actual writing it needs a lot of work.  My advice, go to the action/adventure section and read some other scripts.  You'll see what I mean.  Start with the ones that have the highest number of views.   Those are usually the good ones.     Study them.   Mimic them, then find your own voice.  

All the best.

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I know the formatting sucks. Damn Microsoft Word. I'll re-up it soon. As far as the story goes it's action adventure. Action is discription heavy, especially in the exposition. As much as I would like to pepper in a cheap "stinger" every other page, in a story like this, it would seem forced. But I like your thought process, I know you mean well. Thank you. JM.

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