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Hi Juan,

I'm new here and English isn’t my native language. Dutch is. So my Englisch probably sucks. But I did some studying about writing screenplay and learnt a few things. Only a few!

I like your screenplay, your storytelling, but you have to look at your formatting. Probably it’s best to use “The Hollywood standard” on  that.
Ok - one thing about formatting: on page 6 you don’t need EXTERIOR and INTERIOR.

EXTERIOR:

It’s Jesses POV, he’s standing inside – so you don’t need EXT

INTERIOR:

Again, we know Jesse is standing inside – so skip INT

Furthermore  - if necessary - going from INT to EXT (or the other way round) use:  EXT./INT HANGAR - DAY

I think I know - in a nutshell - what Dreamscale is trying to tell the worldis that screenwriting his hard, study, study, study. And:

After having a good logline and professionally formatting your script absolutely needs:

(1)     Stating the Theme within the first 10 pages;

(2)     Rising Action;

(3)     An Active Hero;

(4)     Character Grows;

(5)     Crispy and Realistic Dialog;

(6)     Not  - on the Nose Storytelling/Dialog;

(7)     Show not Tell -and-  Don’t Talk the Plot ;
     “Well, you’re my sister,  you should know!”

(     It’s Primal – PRIMAL – PRIMAL;

(9)     Clear and Present Danger;

(10)  Less is More –but sometimes - More is More.
(in the Golden Scenes More is More)

Keep the flow.

Cheers Rutger
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Rath
Posted: June 9th, 2011, 9:19am Report to Moderator
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Keep the peace all...we are in this together so keep those scripts coming...it's very good and can be engaging...try adding a second protocol to the story....always works...
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How did you get the Spanish accent marks in your script, was there a special program or setting you had to put into your computer?


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