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Don
Posted: January 3rd, 2021, 1:08pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Retaliation by Otomewo Simon - Action, Adventure - Singh comes to USA with the aim of becoming president and burn down America, but his plans gets twisted after his group stopped working with him, he came up with a plan of eliminating all of them after he escaped prison, but in the long run his plans were altered once again. 151 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice


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you gotta work on that logline bro
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Welcome, Otomewo Simon, I'm assuming you may be new to SS.
A few links you might find helpful:

Newbs guide to SS:
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-cc/m-1124159895/s-new/

Logline assistance:
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-logline/

Screenwriting Class
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-screenwrite/

Tell us a bit about yourself (optional):
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/


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Agree that the logline isn't standard, but I opened the script and skimmed a few pages and it seems to be formatted well and industry standard.

Otomewo, if you can make it known that you're on the board and reading these, I'll give this a read for you.


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