No he'd stop seeing the "demons" to see his slaughtered colleagues.

Oh, so he thinks hes killing demons instead of his friends, and at the end he realizes he killed his friends or sumthing?

I should start writing later.

Exactly.

Oh okay, i finally get it now...So the friends know whats really going on, and are running away from the man, and tring to persuade to him that their not demons.
So theres his POV, and then it shows what really is going on?

Or you could just keep it at his point of view of the guy so that it'll come as a surprise to the readers when they see it's all in his head, you know.

Now, what about focusing on who the characters are...

Yeah, but how will the other characters get spot light, and dialouge.

Should this happen- The other characters are shown when the man isnt around them....and then while the man walks, he spots a demon, which is really a person, and he kills it.??

Or, the whole thing will jus be in the POV of the man.

Well write the other characters as you normally would, the only thing that would be in his head would be them trying to kill him. Though he'd kill them. And hell maybe you could even have an angle or something along those lines come to him...

And yes the entire thing would have to be in his POV.

Okay, thanks for the help. Im gonna begin working on it, but i think there should be a little bit more characters, since there will be only 5 throughout the whole script.

Well how long would the script be? Since for a short five characters should work fine.

Its a short, i think, Because my teacher said the book kit has only limited pages, It mite be like around 12, but im not completely sure. I can u se a smaller font, if i have to.

Then I'd stick with five character or even less. Since twelve pages goes by quite quickly, you know.

Yeah, i mite have to try to change the format, because i don't think itll all be able to fit.

How do u feel aboutthis plot.

The man and his 4 friends travel in a tomb to find ancient stuff. They find Lucifer's tomb, and the man unleashes his lucifer's spirit, and gets possessed, and kills his teammates. But at the end, he snaps back into reality, and the spirit goes away, and he finds aempy box he killed people for, and hes left in the deesert with nothhing.

I trried to keep it simple. What u think, Zig?

Sounds pretty good, though I'd try to keep the idea of it all being in his head, you know.

It does work now about the characters who do you think they should be?

I dont know. U got any ideas and descriptions, becaus ethere are onl;y 5 characters, and there gonna be crucial.

Should there be 2 boys 2 girls and the man??

Sorry to jump in here, but I was thinking that it may be quite hard to have 5 characters involved in a script that's gonna be 12 pages or 12 minutes of script.

You may want to drop it down to a foursome...how about this:

1. The main character. A well known archeologist.
2. A local man, Egyptian/Middle-Eastern. He knows the main character from previous expeditions, and trusts him. He's the one who finds out about the tomb and contacts the main character to tell him that something's out in the desert.
3&4. A rich, snobby couple. They helped pay for the expedition, and at the last moment decided that they wanted to come along. The woman is beautiful, the husband is the very jealous type.

No one else will come to the dig site because they are scared of what's hidden under the sand.

Have lots of illusions of death and satan. Look some up on the internet. 666, pentagons etc..etc..

Hope this helps and sorry to butt in..