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Eric Stokes
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So, I've been commissioned to write a script by someone who has an idea, but doesn't have the writing ability necessary to actually complete a screenplay.  Because of this, he's asked me to take his idea and draft out a script.  I'm very interested in undertaking this project, but I wanted to see if you guys knew what I should ask for in terms of compensation.  This guy has already said he would pay me, but I have a feeling that he's going to ask what I want, as opposed to him just telling me what he'll pay.

Now, I'm not a professional screenwriter, but I've optioned two screenplays before.  Also, drafting out an entire screenplay will take a good chunk of my time, so I'm looking at a pretty big commitment here.  I feel like I have some leverage to work with here.

So, what do you all think?  What's reasonable to ask for, and what should I take into account when accepting this assignment?

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dogglebe
Posted: November 15th, 2010, 6:03pm Report to Moderator
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I'd ask for money up front, first and foremost.  If he suggests points on the backend, you will not get a dime unless the film is produced and it makes a profit.

As to how much you should get, that depends on a lot of factors.  How big of a production is this expected to be?


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Eric Stokes
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Quoted from dogglebe

As to how much you should get, that depends on a lot of factors.  How big of a production is this expected to be?


It's a bit trickier of a situation, as it's not for a specific production, per se.  The guy wants to shop it around town.  His wife is an agent at a rather large talent agency, and she's agreed to show it around upon completion.  So one might say that that in and of itself is incentive enough to do it, but it is still work that should be paid for.

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Quoted from Eric Stokes
His wife is an agent at a rather large talent agency...


Ask her.

And decide beforehand what the bare minimum you will do this for really is.  That will be based upon factors that only you can decide, based upon your time and lifestyle.

Keep it to yourself, of course, but in any negotiation like this, you should know where the basement is before you even pick up the phone.


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Murphy
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Quoted from Eric Stokes


It's a bit trickier of a situation, as it's not for a specific production, per se.  The guy wants to shop it around town.  His wife is an agent at a rather large talent agency, and she's agreed to show it around upon completion.  So one might say that that in and of itself is incentive enough to do it, but it is still work that should be paid for.



This is a spec then. I don't think you want to have any payment from them for it. You want your name on it. It should be written by you, based on a story by him, and you both share the credit. I would expect half of what it sells for, if it sells and nothing if it doesn't. Otherwise you run the risk of selling yourself short if the spec ends up selling for a decent sum.



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Why does this sound like a post that has been here just recently?

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Quoted from bert

And decide beforehand what the bare minimum you will do this for really is.  That will be based upon factors that only you can decide, based upon your time and lifestyle.



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This is a spec then. I don't think you want to have any payment from them for it. You want your name on it. It should be written by you, based on a story by him, and you both share the credit. I would expect half of what it sells for, if it sells and nothing if it doesn't. Otherwise you run the risk of selling yourself short if the spec ends up selling for a decent sum.  


These seem to be two conflicting views (money vs. credit); although I suppose Bert could be in favor of either.  I know I'm new at this and all, but it seems like I should get some kind of payment for my work, especially because it has the potential to go, quite literally, nowhere.  Also, is it not possible to get both?


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Why does this sound like a post that has been here just recently?


Wouldn't really know that; just joined.   But thanks for the internet hospitality.  
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The reason it sounds conflicting is because there is more than one path to take.   It all depends on where you want to go.  

You can sell right up front.  Write the script for cash.  What they do with it afterward is none of your business.   In most cases this is probably what a professional would do.  As a matter of fact I believe that the writer's guild agreements prevent a writer being asked to write specs without being paid for it.

However, if you are not a guilded screenwriter, then it is up to you.  If you think the guys wife can sell it and you are confident in your abilities to write it  then you can defer payment until it is sold.  You might even make more off of it that way - of course you could make less too.  It's always going to be a gamble no matter how you slice it.

The reason this post sounds familiar is because a wife made a post a couple of weeks ago looking for a writer to write a screenplay about her husbands life.   It wasn't a reference to you but at the situation you are in.    
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The reason it sounds conflicting is because there is more than one path to take.   It all depends on where you want to go.  

You can sell right up front.  Write the script for cash.  What they do with it afterward is none of your business.   In most cases this is probably what a professional would do.  As a matter of fact I believe that the writer's guild agreements prevent a writer being asked to write specs without being paid for it.

However, if you are not a guilded screenwriter, then it is up to you.  If you think the guys wife can sell it and you are confident in your abilities to write it  then you can defer payment until it is sold.  You might even make more off of it that way - of course you could make less too.  It's always going to be a gamble no matter how you slice it.


Thanks for the advice; you all have given me a bit to think about.


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The reason this post sounds familiar is because a wife made a post a couple of weeks ago looking for a writer to write a screenplay about her husbands life.   It wasn't a reference to you but at the situation you are in.    


Ah, didn't know quite how to read that.  Now I do.  
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Quoted from mcornetto
The reason it sounds conflicting is because there is more than one path to take.   It all depends on where you want to go.  

You can sell right up front.  Write the script for cash.  What they do with it afterward is none of your business.   In most cases this is probably what a professional would do.  As a matter of fact I believe that the writer's guild agreements prevent a writer being asked to write specs without being paid for it.

However, if you are not a guilded screenwriter, then it is up to you.  If you think the guys wife can sell it and you are confident in your abilities to write it  then you can defer payment until it is sold.  You might even make more off of it that way - of course you could make less too.  It's always going to be a gamble no matter how you slice it.

The reason this post sounds familiar is because a wife made a post a couple of weeks ago looking for a writer to write a screenplay about her husbands life.   It wasn't a reference to you but at the situation you are in.    


Decisions-decisions.

If it were me, because I'm crazy and optimistic, when I'm not reading Yeaster's "The Unseen", I'd go for the deferral option. I'd write like hell and then throw it away and leave it to the wind. If it was mine in the first place, it would come back. If not-- oh well.

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Murphy
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Quoted from mcornetto
a matter of fact I believe that the writer's guild agreements prevent a writer being asked to write specs without being paid for it.

However, if you are not a guilded screenwriter, then it is up to you.  If you think the guys wife can sell it and you are confident in your abilities to write it  then you can defer payment until it is sold.  You might even make more off of it that way - of course you could make less too.  It's always going to be a gamble no matter how you slice it.  


If you are a guilded writer then there actually is a minimum amount you have to be paid is there not Michael? I think it is around $85k.

I think they can stop you writing on commission for no money, but they can't do anything about you collaborating on a spec with someone who has an idea. If you go that route you just have to be clear that this is not a commission and you are collaborating on a spec. That is exactly what a spec is, a script that you write for nothing hoping to make money when it sells.

If you want paid upfront maybe ask for the guild minimum. But have they really got money to actually pay you? I mean, at the end of the day if they are willing to pay guild minimum then why you? there must be plenty of screenwriters already with credits who will write it for minimum.

At the end of the day what is it worth to you? Is the story better than anything you could write on your own? Is this agents involvement going to help sell it? Or are you just better off spending the time writing your own script?

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James McClung
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If he's offering to pay you, why would you turn it down for something you already deserve (credit)? Credit should be a given and if you get a contract, make sure it is a given. If there's any language in the clause that suggests it might slip his mind, get rid of it. This is the one thing you should have locked down in any agreement.

As far as payment goes, ask him what he's offering. If he found you here, chances are he's not going to give you $85k. You should get something up front in any case. Try for 3% back end in addition to that. 5% if you're feeling lucky. I'm assuming this is an independent production so I don't see why he wouldn't give it to you. The film could just as easily not make a cent.

I agree with Bert as well. Think of a minimum you will work for and keep it in mind during negotiations.

At the same time, keep in mind that if you're writing on spec, the film could just as easily not see the light of day. You're taking a risk regardless.


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Murphy
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James, I might have interpreted this wrong, but to me it does not read as though he is being asked to write for a film. They want him to write a script so they can then try and sell it. So really they are just asking him to write a spec for them. It really does not make much sense seen as she is an agent anyway. And not sure at all why an agent would offer to pay someone to write a spec script.
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James McClung
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Gotcha. So forget the back end. Just money up front.


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dogglebe
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Let's put it this way:

1.  You agree to write a spec script in exchange for credit and something in the backend.  You spend a couple of weeks doing this, working with someone who can't write a script.

2.  The script is never sold.  You get no credit or payments.

3.  The script is sold to someone who tells your non-writing partner that he will get points after it's produced.  Still no credit or payments.

4.  Production starts.  Hooray!  But something happens and production stops (most likely permanently).    You get no credit or payments.

5.  The film is shot.  However, the people involved don't know what they're doing and it is lost in post production limbo.    You get no credit or payments.

6.  The film is completed.  But the producer couldn't get a distributor.  You get credit but no payments.

7.  The film makes it to one or two film festivals and it gets panned.  The director is a hack.  The theater students who missed class to film this... shouldn't have.    You get credit but no payments.

8.  The film does not make it's money back and you can find copies in the local 99 cent store.    You get credit but no payments.

Payment up front sounds pretty now, don't it?


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