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I find them very distracting. "Look at me! Look at meeeeee!" I don't want to look at you, mini-slug; I'm halfway down the page trying to read dialogue.
If you're giong to use bold Slugs, please...please, write good, solid Slugs, because if you don't, and you bold them, they are going to stand out and it will be extremely obvious that you don't know how to write good, solid Slugs.
...and...you know who you are, piss poor Slug writers!
Writing for myself, the bold slug lines help you flip through the script. If I see too many or too few, there may be some scene issues worth looking into. Anyone flipping pages should see around 30+ bold scene slugs for a three act story.
Also, I think format should be adjusted depending on what you're writing. For instance, I'm currently writing a high tech action/thriller. There's scenes where the modern science flies as much as the bullets.
Strong and clear -Bold & Underlined- slugs stand out from the action/tech heavy prose. Without them, those kinds of scenes would look like a MARATHON to read through. Which is the last thing I want when I'm spinning a set piece to entertain the reader.
Bottom Line: I'll use any slug format that helps my spec stay out of a prodco's trash barrel. They can be used to make a read more appealing, depending on the story.
If you've got a script with long meditative scenes, I wouldn't bold a thing. Since there's a lot of white on the page already, keep it simple.
Cheers, E.D.
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I don't need to flip pages as I read my scripts over and over again until I get sick of them. I know every scene and instinctively know if a scene is too long, because they generally go over 5 pages.
Personally, I don't care about bold slugs. If someone paying a lot of money asked me to do it, then I'd do it. I'd probably ask why, but if they're paying, whatever. Otherwise, I do whatever I want... in fact, now everyone else is doing it I'm even less likely to do so.
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Strong and clear -Bold & Underlined- slugs stand out from the action/tech heavy prose. Without them, those kinds of scenes would look like a MARATHON to read through. Which is the last thing I want when I'm spinning a set piece to entertain the reader.
How would bold slugs make action-heavy prose seem like any less of a marathon to get through? Twaddle is a good word for that.