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Mr.Ripley
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 9:32pm Report to Moderator
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A vampric jaws. How fascinating. lol.

I wanted to pop in here so no one thinks I've disappeared. I'm going to think about this and probably enter a post tonight or tomorrow latest.  


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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Dreamscale
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 9:42pm Report to Moderator
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Love the word "vampiric"...I wanted to use it, but it came up as a non word, so I decided not to throw it in.  Damn...I'll use it next time, cause it sounds very cool.

Keep your old friend, Bush, alive Mr. Ripley...please?  Remember, we go way back.  Clean out those damn Ladies of the Night!

Looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.  It's alot of fun...alot more fun than I anticipated for sure.

Good job Captain Rabbit!
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 10:16pm Report to Moderator
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Love the word "vampiric"...I wanted to use it, but it came up as a non word, so I decided not to throw it in.  Damn...I'll use it next time, cause it sounds very cool.

Keep your old friend, Bush, alive Mr. Ripley...please?  Remember, we go way back.  Clean out those damn Ladies of the Night!

Looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.  It's alot of fun...alot more fun than I anticipated for sure.

Good job Captain Rabbit!


Bush, just because it's a non word- doesn't mean you can't use it. Take a look at the evolution of language. I like good grammar and spelling, but I'm not so pedantic to restrict my thinking in such a way that "just because it's been this way, it should stay this way". For example: LOL It's not a word, or is it? That could be debated.

I think "vampiric" is an excellent word.

Sandra




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Dreamscale
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 10:28pm Report to Moderator
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Sandra, my dear, I agree whole heartedly.  I have no problem bucking the system, as you might know.  I had it in there, and I did several checks on it, and I got a bunch of "no, no, no's".  My bad, as I love the way it sounds...and reads.

I doubt I'll have another shot at it, but you can bet your Pyramid Portal Opener that I'll throw that word out there first chance I get...but then again, I won't be able to use that "word" unless I'm writing a "vampiric" script.

Hey, seriously, I puposely threw a bunch of whacky stuff in here for you, girl!  I love your whacky imagination, and I will continue to jest about your Albertan herbage.  Hope you liked the crazy turn of events.  I wanted to bring back some of your "creations", but I didn't see the way, or the light, so to speak.

We'll see what becomes of our beloved 3 pants too small Captain, lying below deck, quivering from whatever ails him...other than a probable broken back.

Let's hope that Alffy continues with teh same zany, crazy shit going down.

You do realize, I hope, that at this point, every single character, be they alive or undead, is completely and magificantly butt-ass naked!!!  How could one ever think it could turn out this way?

Funny stuff for sure...
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MBCgirl
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Okay...thought since everyone is supposed to be naked I should be as well   No doubt the Countess and I are naked and looking for blood and revenge.  

Good job there Bush!  You had me laughing many a time...I throw my hands in the air and just give up...no logic needed anymore...we now have a mako vampire shark, so all things logical are thrown out the window...or at least overboard!

This is indeed a very entertaining collaborative effort...I'm in...the question...how will it end...or will it ever really end...that is the true question!

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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 7th, 2008, 1:17am Report to Moderator
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Okay...thought since everyone is supposed to be naked I should be as well   No doubt the Countess and I are naked and looking for blood and revenge.  

Good job there Bush!  You had me laughing many a time...I throw my hands in the air and just give up...no logic needed anymore...we now have a mako vampire shark, so all things logical are thrown out the window...or at least overboard!

This is indeed a very entertaining collaborative effort...I'm in...the question...how will it end...or will it ever really end...that is the true question!

Vampire Morgan


I don't think this can end. I love you guys so much and it's really something special to work with you all.

This has been a karmic experience for sure. (As Yohn would say) Note to self: Dont' try and explain "Karmic" falling through floors to a weird Dream Generator is enough.

Love to you all,

Sandra




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mcornetto
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Tracksheet is updated and emails are sent.  We are really getting close to the end here only four more turns and three more characters to go.
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At least i went out with a BANG!....vampire sharks ftw
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At least i went out with a BANG!....vampire sharks ftw


I hear that! Kick-ass way to go! ...AND butt-nekked to boot!

Note to self: 100th post! Yay me!
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Mr.Ripley
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I like the way the word sounds too. Vampiric.

I actually learned alot through this experience. thanks guys. Hopefully it shows in my upcoming script.


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
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Mr.Ripley
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Entry entered. It's a bit small but I didn't want to expound on many things. Besides, keeping track of the characters locations had me confused. lol.


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/

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Dreamscale
Posted: November 7th, 2008, 11:39am Report to Moderator
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It is a bit smallish.

What's the shark doing while they're all enjoying their nudity?
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MBCgirl
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Ripley...I was so looking forward to your entry...there just isn't a lot here...but I suppose you were short on time...I do like Zadora...she is in position to be the winner here unless something happens.  Cornetto has something special in his pocket...so he needs to find his own pants instead of the ones he's wearing that are too small and someone dirtied! yuk!

Bush...where are those handcuffs when you need them!  I suppose that's the price of getting naked!

The ship's course is set...where are they going...wherever it is - it cannot be undone! lol  

Cheers!


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I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.  

When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


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I'm wondering with the ever reducing cast, if the rules for the murder scenes can be changed? Do we still have to have two characters alone?

Good job by the way Gabe. I feel a battle is about to commence in the jacuzzi! haha


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Mr.Ripley
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I'm trying to keep things simple. I could have easily confused the readers by adding alot of details. But I'm trying to cut that down in my writing. So I decided to go for short, simple, and broad. I didn't want to show favorites between Bush or Ste or constrict the other writer in what to do next.  

I'm interested in how the next writer will handle the fight. lol. That's going to be funny.    

About the shark, I really didn't think about it much. She could be Zadora's pet after the fight? lol.


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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