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mcornetto
Posted: November 7th, 2008, 2:17pm Report to Moderator
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Well it's a bit neck and neck at the moment. (get it 'bit neck')

Good job Gabe - don't worry about the size - they tell me it doesn't matter.  It's how you use it that counts and I think you did a good job of beginning the wrap up in your post.

Though I am a bit pissed off because I lost the 5 buck that I had on a T. Joe win.  

Just kidding - it was two bucks.  

Just kidding again - I'm no gambler.

Ste Brown is up next.  And I certainly am not going to bet on whether he is he going to choose the naked man or the naked woman. Questions of that nature are best left to the individuals involved and should only be talked about in hushed voices.

I'll post the updated tracksheet soon.  

EDIT: Tracksheet is updated.

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Well done Gabe.

Now it's Ste turn. Finally, let's see if Ste as well is addict to nudists



Gift of Blood - NEW! co-written tonkatough
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 7th, 2008, 2:32pm Report to Moderator
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Poor T Joe. Ah well, I can see him hangin' in there, ready to fall onto another  ledge and neatly into a new life.

Good job Gabriel, I loved the "head knock". Fabulous stuff!!!

Sandra



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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 7th, 2008, 2:40pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Mr.Ripley
I'm trying to keep things simple. I could have easily confused the readers by adding alot of details. But I'm trying to cut that down in my writing. So I decided to go for short, simple, and broad. I didn't want to show favorites between Bush or Ste or constrict the other writer in what to do next.  

I'm interested in how the next writer will handle the fight. lol. That's going to be funny.    

About the shark, I really didn't think about it much. She could be Zadora's pet after the fight? lol.


I think that's an excellent idea!!!! Make the shark Zadora's pet!! That would be fun!!!



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Michael, Their at the sunbed terrace not at the jacuzzi. But it's close by...I don't know anymore. lol. That was part of why I made the entry so short and simple. The locations were driving me crazy. Not like I'm not after going on this boat trip. lol.

Can't wait for your entry Ste. Sorry for putting you in a bad position to fight. Lol. Hope you make it out alive.  


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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I say Ste and I join forces and kill that blood sucker once and for all!  We've got some drinking to do anyway...

BTW, how is Zadora laying out on a recliner, naked as a jaybird, enjoying the sun, anyway?  The sun has got to be taking its toll on her pale-ass body.
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mcornetto
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Quoted from Mr.Ripley
Michael, Their at the sunbed terrace not at the jacuzzi.


Oops! Sorry Gabe.  I'll let Ste know.


STE!!! THEY'RE AT THE SUNBED TERRACE - NOT THE JACUZZI!!!

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She's no ordinary vamp. She's one of the first one. lol.

I don't think he heard you Michael. Shout it out more.


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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What was that Michael? Didn't quite hear ya pal.

I'm at work tomorrow...yeah, a Saturday!? But I'll get my part written at some point tomorrow. Maybe while I'm waiting for the Calazaghe fight...it's a late one.

I say naked wrestling! haha


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Sandra Elstree.
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This is how I envision the Gabriel character:

(n)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vyJD1ZZmjxA&feature=related(n)

(Jude Law - The Holiday)

...and I think the peace of mind he's looking for in this segment is the same peace of mind each character aboard the ship is looking for.

Sandra



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This was why I thought Bert might have been thought way too above the normal thoughts of his day:

(n)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8v_2wlhOXLI(n)

I imagined him like this person talking.

Sandra



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Sandra,

that is not the bert that appears in my fanta... mind!!

I'm amazed I'm still alive. Too bad I don't get to kill someone in my next turn. I would've loved to.  


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Quoted from Grandma Bear
Sandra,

that is not the bert that appears in my fanta... mind!!

I'm amazed I'm still alive. Too bad I don't get to kill someone in my next turn. I would've loved to.  


That's ok though Pia, just go with what you feel in your heart. In this particular exercise, I think that was the idea because there were no clear rules defined at the outset. In the next game, we'll try and work more within a specific genre because I think we know that that's where we need to aim in the next work.

Go for it though girl!!!! Don't hold back!!!

Sandra



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Sandra...

I'm not known to be one that holds back!  


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