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mcornetto
Posted: November 4th, 2008, 3:08pm Report to Moderator
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No rewrites Nik.  Sorry.  

And GM, How is it that you knew exactly what I searched for?  I think someone else better do some cache purging. lol.
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Quoted from Sandra Elstree.
The visuals were excellent with the bullet that ricochets off Ste's crotch and heads towards the crystal. I could easily see this happening slow mo.

Sandra


All I can say is Ste must have balls of steel for a bullet to ricochet off of them and up to his belt buckle!   It might work in reverse at least. tee hee

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haha balls of steel. It's dark magic...that's my explanation. Either that or he's a robot hell bent on destroying humans who take luxury cruises.
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Oops...it was a crystal, not a belt buckle   I remember Sandra crying out...NO! NO!


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Well now I'm really confused? People nearly dying and now people dying twice lol.


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Sandra Elstree.
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Quoted from MBCgirl


All I can say is Ste must have balls of steel for a bullet to ricochet off of them and up to his belt buckle!   It might work in reverse at least. tee hee

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LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I meant to say belt buckle-- I guess I couldn't help but look down!




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Ste has balls of steal? Maybe he is from the north east of England so you never know. It's strange in a script where most characters are losing their clothes, Ste hasn't. I say strange because Geordies don't usually wear shirts unless it's absolutely necassary.


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 4th, 2008, 4:25pm Report to Moderator
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haha balls of steel. It's dark magic...that's my explanation. Either that or he's a robot hell bent on destroying humans who take luxury cruises.


Shoot!!! That's all we need now are robots! I can't stop laughing! It's Gabriel with his laugh inducing powers! He's died twice... poor Alffy's been stabbed in the crotch and in the eye!! Yohn can't keep his mustache straight- Dana tries like hell to get out of THE ROOM, and now she's tryin' like hell to get back in- Cornetto's running around naked!!! T Joe's the only normal one around here-- and he's got NARCOLEPSY!!!!!!! HA-HA-HA!!!!!

Please help me!!!! This may be a crazy ride, but I've loved every minute of it.

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and he's got NARCOLEPSY


This has to be the best way of explaining why a character hasn't done anything or gone anywhere for a while during the story lol. Pure genius in my eyes.


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 4th, 2008, 4:35pm Report to Moderator
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This has to be the best way of explaining why a character hasn't done anything or gone anywhere for a while during the story lol. Pure genius in my eyes.


Absolutely, and someone now needs to draw up a scene with him about to shoot someone and he falls asleep just before pulling the trigger or plunging the blade!




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NiK
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I see that killing Gabriel twice wasn't a good thing to do by me, but I thought he was alive.

Well, do you still like the scene even if we killed him twice?



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Dreamscale
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Just kill him a third time and everything will be cool.
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Just kill him a third time and everything will be cool.


I will let you do it



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mcornetto
Posted: November 4th, 2008, 5:09pm Report to Moderator
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Yes, Nik.  I liked the scene.  I thought you did a nice job creating the atmosphere and story.   I understand that because of technical reasons you had the wrong tracksheet.

However, there was another rule issue with this scene even besides killing Gabriel a second time.  It was not clear who the killer was.

Cheers,

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It was not clear who the killer was.


I don't think this is a problem. DANA KILLED HIM. But the camera was used by Nik to kill the people in the photos.




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