Congrats to your mod status Michael!!!  

Quoted from Grandma Bear Congrats to your mod status Michael!!!

What? Am I a mod? Oh! I've gone all purple.  How'd that happen?

I guess Don likes you, but I understand. so do I.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear I guess Don likes you, but I understand. so do I.

Awww shucks...*blushes*

Actually, Don only makes people he wants to punish a moderator.  I guess I did something wrong...  

I am intrigued with the direction the story is taking so far. I've been keeping an eye on it all day and in the interest if keeping the story moving I'm going to have to agree with everyone else and say yes to that amendment ^,^

Ok. Blakkwolfe's turn has been postponed and in his place MBCGirl will go. Tracksheet has been updated.

Hi everyone,

I have been reading the posts and the scripts -- this is moving so good. I actually like it very much Michael. And i believe it will one of the best things done at SS in a long time.

It's fresh and new.

Ok guys go ahead and kill somebody

I'm ready to go...my brain has been activated! =)  
~m~

Despite our little hiccup this evening we are back to the correct posts and Morgan is about to post.  Thanks Jeff and my apologies.

Not a problem...Jeff reposted and I have now posted mine.

Thanks for helping me out with that Cornetto...I didn't mean to be so much trouble.

Anyway...we're  back on track!  

P.S.  I think it would be good to have some critque of what we write...or at least some comments pertinent to the writing and the direction.

As I have mentioned...I am learning so any constructive comments would be  great for me!   

My comments are: So far...I love this...and I especially like that it can be anything we want it to be...just like a group of musicians contribute to each other...our scenes are being linked together to write something very unique. That's very cool!

I LOVE the part where Countess Zadora is whispering to Bush...and how he developed the relationships with all these men. I also like the card professional Ste   

And of course without the foundational elements to this (Cornetto)...it wouldn't be nearly as interesting as it is...

It's going to be exciting to see how this plays out!
~m~

I also feel that the characters

oops...I also feel that the characters are starting to develop and blend...sorry...I was a little fast on the "Post Reply" button

Interesting scene.  I wonder how we know one another?  I like that I have a your bed on the bridge -- I certainly am prepared (If you want to change that click the modify button).  

Of course we can comment on how scenes work or how they don't. We want everybody to learn from this exercise.

And since I'm at work and I can't update the track sheet just yet - I guess I'll update status here for the moment.

Up next is Zadora - By Oct 28.

In addition to what is on the track sheet.

Cooper has taken her turn.

Sandra is Introduced, and Missing near the elevator.  She is also a possible victim/killer.

Cornetto is on the bridge.

Cooper is in Room 402.

And I think murder is in the air.  

You mean you have already claimed Cabin 402????  You're the captain...and your bedroom is on the Bridge Deck...

I'm confused

Sorry mate, missed the location slug because it wasn't bolded.  And I'm not going to try bolding it either because I know that you used every available character that you could in that post.  Congratulations for that!