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bert
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 7:07pm Report to Moderator
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The next turn is the good Dr. Bert.  Who knows what he's going to do...


I've been keeping kind of quiet, but I'm here.

I have studied each post and every character very carefully.

I have big plans for some of you, and I am a big fan of the cliffhanger.  Whoever follows after me will need to put on their thinking caps.

I will try to have something up by morning -- and I can (almost) guarantee you will not see the end coming...


Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!
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Posted: November 1st, 2008, 7:22pm Report to Moderator
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haha well done Yohn. Great turn, really really funny.


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haha. the change underwear line made me laugh. Good John Yohn.
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The tracksheet has been updated.

Oh! And I wanted to make a special mention that Yohn's murder scene was the first one that didn't stretch the rules.  Nicely done Yohn.
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You may have come in late, but you have made a great contribution to this collaboration.   Good job Yohn Yohn!


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I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.  

When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


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Good job Yohn!  


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 7:48pm Report to Moderator
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I really loved the work Yohn did with Nic and Dana's character.

When he comes at Dana with a pizza cutter and we expect one thing and we're bammed twice:

Once, when Dana says: A pizza cutter... are you shitting me?!

That was a good bam!

And then secondly,

When we're caught in this mind track and suddenly,

A gun fires and blows Nic all the way to our lovely little gathering above it all.

Bam again!

Redrum! Redrum!

Fantastic work!

Sandra



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Posted: November 1st, 2008, 7:56pm Report to Moderator
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ME ~ but I must stop now.  Your cholesterol is so high. I must think of my health.

This is a really funny.

Your Swedish, does it translate as?: My dear captain, I'm sorry, but I had to. I was hungry.

A funny ending Pia.

Nice writing Orange.

Great montagé Mr Ripley.

Sandra, love the line ~ ...induces people into hysterical laughter...

Love your writing Sandra.

Alffy, thought your line ~ Who are you, and what's wrong with your face?  Was pretty funny.

Good work GM bringing in the scene regarding zadora holding cornetto.

I thought your Patrick verses Sandra's breasts to be amusing.

Interesting conclusion Nik.

Wonderful writing Yohn, really entertaining.  Quite a few laughs were in there.


I must say Cornetto, this is turning out to be an interesting magical ride I'm going on.

Who's up next?


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I must say Captain that I was highly skeptical of this idea when you first raised it but fair play to you for sticking with it and getting it up and running. It is highly entertaining, well done.

I loved your post Yohn, very funny and very clever. Managing to get yourself a kill on the board without being a killer is a bit genius.

I did feel a little sorry for Cornetto getting to meet his maker so early in the story so obviously have tried to put him in a position where he could be brought back by the doctor, at least our three corpses all now have an equal chance of being resurrected. Although judging by Bert's last comment maybe we can't assume anything. I am looking forward to Bert's contribution.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 10:02pm Report to Moderator
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Thank you jayrex for contributing even though you aren't playing this round.

I've got Good Cop, Bad Cop on my To-do list right after Mike's Pimp Juice rewrite.




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That's funny Yohn. Great scene. Nic's character as you portrayed him reminded me of the film titled Peeping Tom. I'm not sure if that was your influence, just wanted to mention it.
Now, on to Bert, is Cornetto coming back alive?


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 10:13pm Report to Moderator
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That's funny Yohn. Great scene. Nic's character as you portrayed him reminded me of the film titled Peeping Tom. I'm not sure if that was your influence, just wanted to mention it.
Now, on to Bert, is Cornetto coming back alive?


That's what I want to know. I think we've all tried desperately to keep Cornetto alive even though he's dead! It's as plain as day on the track sheet, but why can't we go with it?!

I love it!

Sandra




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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 10:16pm Report to Moderator
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LOL, I'm just thinking the reason is:

We love him so much, we just can't let him die! ;

Sandra



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Mr.Ripley
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 10:38pm Report to Moderator
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Well, it appears that he is only captain on board to sail the boat. If we lose him, we're history. I didn't mind doing that, but I didn't want to be responsible of actually doing it. lol.

And according to the rules, Dr. Bert can bring back someone. Basically that's the answer


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 2nd, 2008, 12:11am Report to Moderator
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Well, it appears that he is only captain on board to sail the boat. If we lose him, we're history. I didn't mind doing that, but I didn't want to be responsible of actually doing it. lol.

And according to the rules, Dr. Bert can bring back someone. Basically that's the answer


This is the exciting part!

I will really love to read the "resurrection scene"!!!

...but I'd die a million times just to die laughing!!! Can someone kill me again please? LOL

Sandra




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