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Mr.Ripley
Posted: October 27th, 2008, 10:41am Report to Moderator
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This reminds me of Lost. Lol. Soon all the questions will be answered. lol.


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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MBCgirl
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Well...it definitely is quite a puzzle...we'll have to see how the "pieces" fit   But that's the interesting part...

I never watched "Lost" but I have a number of friends that do...or it could just be suggestive of the direction we are going...lol  

Funny things happen in Bermuda...


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When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


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Dreamscale
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Pretty cool stuff so far.  This is fun and will hopefully teach us all something as well.  What will that be?  No clue, but I think it's a great exercise anyway you look at it.

Nice scenes, MBC!  Some good twists thrown in.  Maybe that silver tipped hair spike will keep Zadora away.  I'm scared of her!  She seems to appaear and disappear at will...

Keep it up people!!!!
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Congrats on starting this game Cornetto & the Mod status.

I wasn't sure about joining this and I have found myself enjoying this game as a spectator.  Now I'll think better of myself for next time.  Can't wait for Zadora's turn.  This game kinda reminds me of Cluedo.  And I always liked that game.

Zadora, Zadora, Zadora...


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mcornetto
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Cheers jayrex.

You're more than welcome to join us next time.  We'll all have a discussion about the next one after the exciting finale of this one.

Really curious about Zadora's turn myself...
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Well I guess I have the dubious honor of being the first the go.

Nicely done Zadora, I'll never forget it.

Next up itmightbeorange - I wonder if she'll avenge my unfortunate demise.

Not much has changed on the board, except, well,  my character is dead.

I'll update the tracksheet when I'm home from work.
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MBCgirl
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Do you mind me asking what you do (work) Cornetto?  You obviously are no longer the ship captain!

Me...I'm going to keep eating garlic! =)  

I loved the fact that Zadora quit sucking his blood because he had high cholesterol    Funny...made me smile!

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Garlic won't protect you from me killing you. I might not suck garlic blood, but I have a bad temper and can kill just because I'm annoyed...  


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I have my scene all written out but it won't be until later today I post it. Just a heads up. I have issues sometimes with being extremely colorful in my descriptions.

Also, there is a vampire loose on the boat...how are we not noticing this stuff? lol I blame it on the booze. Personally.
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Quoted from Grandma Bear
Garlic won't protect you from me killing you. I might not suck garlic blood, but I have a bad temper and can kill just because I'm annoyed...  


You're funny Pia   
No matter...it saved my ass this time and I'm thankful...you seductive little "blood sucker" you!



http://www.myspace.com/mbcgirl  

I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.  

When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


MBCgirl =)
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mcornetto
Posted: October 28th, 2008, 2:42am Report to Moderator
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Tracking sheet is updated and emails are out.

Dreamscale, of course we are learning lots about collaboration.  You incorporated other's ideas by writing about their characters and they do the same with yours.  Yours and everyone's contribution affect the course of this script.  And like I said, it may not be the most logical script but we're learning and we'll get better at it.

MBCgirl,  If I told you what I did for work then I'd have to kill you.

Zadora, you're so funny,  you slay me!

itmightbeorange, I'm sure I'm not the only one dying of curiosity about your scene...


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So Michael, you're the first to fall...bummer for you. Think I may have to brush up on the rules cos I thought the deaths had to involve two characters and not really stated who did the deed, therefore putting both characters in the frame for the murder? On a side note, where the fudge am I? The good news is that the longer I'm hiding away the longer I stay alive lol...or the less people for me to kill
muh ha ha ha ha...cough, I need a drink now.


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I'm sorry about snuffing the Captain, but the good Dr. Bert can resurrect people...


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Yes...the good doctor can bring someone back to life...maybe you didn't hold the Captain's nose long enough!

I was going to write you in Alffy but your character introduction is also in the bar and actually behind the bar (we already have a bartender in the main saloon), with a hot blonde...so maybe you will come into play in the bar on the upper deck...there is a bar there too.   

We have a lot of drinkers so it's a good thing we have a couple of bars on the boat!

Cheers!  



http://www.myspace.com/mbcgirl  

I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.  

When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


MBCgirl =)
My finger nails should look nice while I type - Red works!
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Mr.Ripley
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How are we ever going to get back on course? Somebody better have boat experience.

This gets better and better. I also thought the murder needed to be mysterious, but the captain could be revived. Or is he?


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
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