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Orange
Posted: October 29th, 2008, 8:11am Report to Moderator
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oooo very interesting turn of events. Zadora wants to keep the body? perhaps she wasn't finished with her meal?
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Thanks Michael. I got a bit confused with naming stuff on the map like the "entrance elevator area" and seeing where they were. I also went back to fix some grammatical errors, hope you don't mind.

MBC girl, complication is my middle name. My other is cryptic. lol.

I'm really interested where Sandra will take this. So, many endless possibilities. I absolutely love the smell of chaos in the air. LOL.


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haha I like the montage Gabe.


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That's why I put it in their. Lol, just thinking about it makes me laugh.

  


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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What a weird bunch of characters we have aboard. It's getting a bit strange but I'm really enjoying this and wondering how it's work out.


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Mr Ripley...even when a person is complicated it can be a VERY good thing...kind of like a good wine =)  Complex but so good on the palet.  Our Countess would definitely know about that! *wink

Sandra...take it away girl!


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: October 30th, 2008, 1:11am Report to Moderator
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Hello everyone!

I just want to thank Michael again for providing us with this opportunity to develop our skills.

I'm in a difficult position because my turn falls right in the middle of some work at the hospital and some other commitments, but I'm grateful because this is the way we need to approach things-- on a deadline and with fervor.

I've been studying the characters and the scrript's progression so far and I've noticed some inconsistencies which are to be expected-- heck, we get them in our own scripts, and now, with all the minds involved, we're surely to run into these kinds of obstacles.

Currently, I'm trying to work out reasons for some of these inconsistencies and develop the context for everyone and motives of some of the characters.

This really is a great challenge and hopefully I can make a good contribution to what feels like an excellent foundation.

Thanks everyone. Let's keep the unity within the script (game) and make it a good one.

See you soon,

Sandra



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Alright.  Who's the wise guy that put inconsistencies in our characters.  C'mon fess up.

Just kidding.

Thanks Sandra for the note explaining why I get a break from having to update the tracksheet after work today .  Right now I have my feet up, a nice glass of wine next to me.  So much leisure time  - I could really get used to this.

Though it's commendable of you to go through all the trouble of making things logical, it really isn't necessary for you to do so.  It's understood by everyone that this is not intended to be a completely logical script.  If we play this again, it might be a different story, but I think really - for this first try - keeping it moving is most important.  IMHO anyways.

Speaking of keeping things moving - I still have not heard from Blakkwolfe.  If anyone knows him and can contact him then please do so.  Failing that I might try to get a ghostwriter for his turn - if you know someone who's interested have them contact me pronto.   Failing that I have another idea.

Cheers guys and girls.        

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Thanks for the pm about the rules Michael, I was a bit confused but you've straightened me out. Love the avatar lol. I can really see this game becoming a reegular thing, different locations and characters can keep it fresh too.


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What the...Hell is going on here?  Talk about a out of nowhere twist in tone, theme...and...well...everything!  I have absolutely not clue what just happened.

Looking forward to hearing what others have to say.  My head is spinning...
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Posted: October 30th, 2008, 10:24pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Dreamscale
What the...Hell is going on here?  Talk about a out of nowhere twist in tone, theme...and...well...everything!  I have absolutely not clue what just happened.

Looking forward to hearing what others have to say.  My head is spinning...


Gosh darn Bermuda Triangle- does it every time!



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The answer lies in the scene.


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SERIES OF SHOTS: as people look in confusion. Where is this coming from?


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It's probably me...but I'm confused by this whole last entry of scenes...

Oh well...it won't be the first time =) nor the last I am sure.  

I thought we weren't supposed to add new characters and now we have a clone...hmmm.

I'll sleep on it and see how it looks inthe morning.

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I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.  

When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


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Some of the questions we all need to answer:

Is a Jekyll/Hyde character two characters?

Can one person inhabit two bodies at the same time?

When Dana Orange exhumed the soul of an apparently dead Cornetto, whose soul did she capture in that crystal of hers?



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it could be because it's 2 in the morning , but i am sure confused with the latest entry. So much going on. I think I understood what was happening at one point then i lost the understanding. Oy vey!
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