You were really cut out for the dreams Sandra. lol. Everything flows nicely with them.

That was a damn creepy dream Sandra, good work!

--Julio

Yeah Sandra, great dream scene!  Awesome!  Wish I had more room to really work with it, but as I told you, I think it's so strong on its own, that I'm not too worried about totally delving into it.

My post is coming jup shrotly everyone. Hope you all like it. I'm pretty psyched about it.

OK, now we're playing with fire!  Hope you all enjoy...

Good job Dreamscale and thanks for taking the turn without a heads up.  Well done Sandra the dream was creepy.  

The tracksheet is updated and emails are sent.  

Next is another New York installment.  Can't wait to see what happens.  However will they get out of the city?

Sandra...I LOVE your dream...they will meet in reality...I think it is safe to say.

I loved how she put the blood on her lips and her cheeks...it was creepy good stuff and kuddos to you Our Dream Maker Sandra!

Dreamscale is my buddy on here for collaboration...so I read it before it was posted but I want to say that I really like how he got this corner of the story going. I like the character development.

I love sweet old Albert and his endearing ways and as per usual I can't seem to get out of the kitchen! (Sam making the boys breakfast) lol

Good job...I can hardly wait to see what Orange adds to this wonderful mix...
It's pretty yummy thus far!
~m~

If a squirrel leaves his nut comes and attacks you, that's when you know things are messed up. lol. I liked Albert's dialogue as he was talking to his wife.  Can't wait for Yohn's part.

Excellent job Dreamscale! We have our explosion! Nicely done!

I especially like the fact of using the innocent squirrel in this.
It comes on very gently and then we're hit with the action.

Also, as I mentioned, I thought we needed to have some good footage
of what was going on outside and you supplied it perfectly with the aerial shot.

Sandra

Hey guys, I got a question, figured I'd ask before my turn comes--

I know we only have one kill to use, but do non-player characters count as "Kills" as well? Do I waste my Kill if I choose to ax a non-player guy/girl?

I'd just like that cleared.

--Julio

Only player characters count as kills.

Well done everyone so far, a very good start to this indeed. Nice job on the dreams Sandra.

Hey all, the story is looking great so far!

I've been busy lately with university stuff, day-job stuff, and a bunch of other stuff that have decided to pile on me, as is common this time of year.  Hence my absense from the boards.

I have my piece half written, but it's not going to be done until tomorrow.  Is this a problem?

If tomorrow is not the fourth day and you are asked to let your buddy read it. You gotta talk to Michael about it.

I thought it was due yesterday, based on the 48 hour rule...

Finish your scene Yohn and post it.   Looking forward to reading it.  

Everybody else.  Correct way to handle the problem of your scene being late - but let this sort of thing be the exception and not the rule.

Cheers guys.